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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Chapter One: Rule Number One: Don't Hack Your School Network. Or If You Do, Don't Get Caught.

    Hey SanaPathan! Welcome to YWS! looseleaf here with a review. I absolutely loved your first chapter! You immediately seize the reader's attention with your opening lines, and you keep it ...

    Jun 29, 2025
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, Realistic Re: The summer

    Hey Kundana! looseleaf here with a review. Overall, I think your narrative is fascinating and relatable--a very good combination. You draw readers in by describing loneliness and emotions that most ...

    Jun 7, 2025
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Health Re: Title: Mind as One

    Hey Splendidior! I hope you're having a great day! Overall, I really like the theme of this poem. Despite being short, you really pack a punch and convey your overall ...

    Sep 27, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, Lyrical Re: β€žIn the Abyss of Solitude"

    Hey Mai073! looseleaf here with a review! First of all: WOW. I loved this! You are an absolutely fantastic writer, and this is one of the best short stories I ...

    Sep 8, 2024
  • Script » Humor, Romantic Re: Je t'aime (I love you) - 3

    Hi Kaavya! looseleaf here with a brief review. I haven't read the past chapters, so this review will be focused on this part only! This character list is very intriguing--all ...

    Sep 8, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: you only have so much time, so you have none at all.

    chrysanthemum, stop, you've literally made me cry on a Thursday evening 😭 Anyways... hi! looseleaf here with a review. This poem was incredible! I absolutely loved it. I have never ...

    Aug 22, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wishful

    Hey watercolours! looseleaf here with her first review of 2024 (yikes). I must say I loved this poem! It was short and sweet, but I think you conveyed a beautiful ...

    Mar 2, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Applause

    Hey Jaygg! I hope you're having a great day! looseleaf here with a review. I absolutely love this poem. It flows so nicely, and you paint a beautiful image. As ...

    Nov 27, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor Re: The Watcher

    Hey LuminescentAnt! I hope you're having a good day! looseleaf here with a review. This poem was great! I liked how simple it was; a lot of poems are all ...

    May 5, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: -

    Hey Rose! looseleaf here with a quick review. I liked this poem! It was short and sweet and cute; three things that I love! Most of your wording is straightforward ...

    Apr 3, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ghost in the machine

    hey figmoon! looseleaf here with a quick review. i really liked this poem! your theme and overall message are pretty good; they kind of spoke to me (y'know? lol). i ...

    Mar 5, 2023
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: singular

    Hey quitesmol! I hope you're having a good day! looseleaf here with a review. I really like this poem! I especially love your theme of memories and love and old ...

    Feb 24, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Review Re: DON'T mourn my death!

    Hi yamatri! looseleaf here with a review. I hope you're having a very nice day! (And, also, a late welcome to YWS!) I must say I did really enjoy this ...

    Jan 30, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Are you happy?

    Hi ShallowHouse! I hope you're having a great day! looseleaf here with a review. Let me start this by saying I absolutely loved this story! It's well written and I ...

    Jan 29, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: (DRAFT) Miscreants: Inauguration - Chapter 5.2

    Alright, Lim, it's time to get this out of the green room after.. 360 days. Yeesh. I will preface this by saying I haven't read the other chapters so please ...

    Sep 10, 2022


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