This poem is sweet and short, which is my favorite!!
I feel like there's a lot to dissect considering it's a short poem. It contains a very deep meaning that many people could relate to.
My favorite part is : (As if they didn't leave, just went for a swim in someone's gaze.) Again, considering how short this is, THIS sentence alone truly means so much. I feel like it's tough for some writers to put a lot of deep meaning and emotion into a small space but you really captured it perfectly! Amazing job:)
Points: 45
Reviews: 5
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