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  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Wishful

    Hey watercolours! looseleaf here with her first review of 2024 (yikes). I must say I loved this poem! It was short and sweet, but I think you conveyed a beautiful ...

    Mar 1, 2024

  • Poetry » Other, Realistic
    Re: Reflections from within

    Hi Youbeaucupid! I hope you're having a great day! looseleaf here with a review. I quite enjoyed this poem. Your topic can be serious and depressing, but the rhythmic way ...

    Dec 29, 2023

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: The Applause

    Hey Jaygg! I hope you're having a great day! looseleaf here with a review. I absolutely love this poem. It flows so nicely, and you paint a beautiful image. As ...

    Nov 27, 2023

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor
    Re: The Watcher

    Hey LuminescentAnt! I hope you're having a good day! looseleaf here with a review. This poem was great! I liked how simple it was; a lot of poems are all ...

    May 5, 2023

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: -

    Hey Rose! looseleaf here with a quick review. I liked this poem! It was short and sweet and cute; three things that I love! Most of your wording is straightforward ...

    Apr 3, 2023

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: ghost in the machine

    hey figmoon! looseleaf here with a quick review. i really liked this poem! your theme and overall message are pretty good; they kind of spoke to me (y'know? lol). i ...

    Mar 5, 2023

  • Poetry » Literature, General
    Re: singular

    Hey quitesmol! I hope you're having a good day! looseleaf here with a review. I really like this poem! I especially love your theme of memories and love and old ...

    Feb 24, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, Review
    Re: DON'T mourn my death!

    Hi yamatri! looseleaf here with a review. I hope you're having a very nice day! (And, also, a late welcome to YWS!) I must say I did really enjoy this ...

    Jan 30, 2023

  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: Are you happy?

    Hi ShallowHouse! I hope you're having a great day! looseleaf here with a review. Let me start this by saying I absolutely loved this story! It's well written and I ...

    Jan 29, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy
    Re: (DRAFT) Miscreants: Inauguration - Chapter 5.2

    Alright, Lim, it's time to get this out of the green room after.. 360 days. Yeesh. I will preface this by saying I haven't read the other chapters so please ...

    Sep 9, 2022

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Health
    Re: how to begin to weave a basket

    Hey lliyah! looseleaf here with a review. Ok, so, you already know how much I love your LMS theme and your poems, and this one is no different. The way ...

    Sep 9, 2022

  • Other » Fantasy, Other
    Re: Cassandra is tired of being bullied

    Hey vampricone! looseleaf here with a short review. I must say, I didn't truly understand this, mostly because I was missing the context/previous parts of the story, but I must ...

    Sep 3, 2022

  • Art » Historical Fiction, Literature
    Re: A Place Between The Desert

    Wow. Ok. I really, really liked this story. It was super detailed, the feelings you convey are amazing, and I feel like I already know the characters even though there ...

    Aug 10, 2022

  • Poetry » General, Other
    Re: Puzzles and Papyrus

    Hey Hawinay! looseleaf here with a review. First off, I really liked this poem! The theme I interpreted is great and I enjoyed reading this poem. I may go as ...

    Jun 12, 2022

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: take me with you

    Hey, looseleaf here with a review! Sorry for taking so long to get to this, I've been busy. :) Just for a heads-up, the photo won't load for me because ...

    Mar 1, 2022


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