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  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: My Bloody Valentine

    wow, this is a really great piece. It is very creepy, an not exactly what you would expect in a story with Valentine in the title, but it pulls you ...

    Jan 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: To Smell a Poem

    Hey lucky! Happy review day You did a great job of accomplishing your goal in this poem. It was very beautifully worded and at the same time you did amazing ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: To Smell a Poem

    Hey lucky! Happy review day You did a great job of accomplishing your goal in this poem. It was very beautifully worded and at the same time you did amazing ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Masking the Pain

    Hey Eternity! Happy review day! Wow!!! this poem is truly beautiful. I feel bad saying that given the sad topic, yet the way you worded it is unfathomably amazing. I ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Love Like a Couch

    Hey Cspr! Happy Review day :D I really enjoyed this poem. I've never really thought of love as being like a couch, but I think that it is the unusualness ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Lonely Companions

    Hey Killjoy, I'm here to review your poem! Happy Review day! :D Anyways, I think you did a great job with this piece of work. It really expresses deep emotion. ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I'm out of time.

    Hey, So, I'm live and I'm here to review your poem, which I should add, I absolutely loved it!!!!!!! I really love the repeated line "I'm out of time. So ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Fly Free

    Wow!!! I honestly can not believe how amazing this poem is. I have read it over a few times trying to find something that I can comment on to help ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: lost and to late

    Hey Princess! This poem is awesome! I love how short, sweet, and to the point it is. It is nice how it seems that it was effortless but is still ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: Dimentia

    I thought that this was a very good and effective poem. However, at some times it was a little bit confusing. I was a little confused when you jumped from ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Silly thoughts :)

    I really loved reading this poem. It is really lighthearted and... your avatar is very distracting and awesome by the way. Anyways, your poem was a very lighthearted and fun ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Silly thoughts :)

    I really loved reading this poem. It is really lighthearted and... your avatar is very distracting and awesome by the way. Anyways, your poem was a very lighthearted and fun ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: thunder

    I think that this is a wonderful poem. I feel like by reading this, I actually know you, and that is a wonderful thing to aim for when writing poetry. ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: My Reflection

    Hey, I really loved this poem! I know that I have definitely felt that way a few times when I looked in the mirror and I think that most people ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: Alien

    Hey KeiPie! Happy reviewing day! Firstly, I would like to say that this is a great poem. I love the subject of it, I think that most people could relate ...

    Jun 25, 2012


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