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Hey Little Author here! Okay so I don't have anything bad to say only good. It was beautifully dark and made me shiver. As I am a teenager my self, ...

Hey Little Author here! I would just like to say this poem was beautiful and it flowed very smoothly. I think thewritersdream mentioned all the things that you could have ...

Hi little author here I really enjoyed this poem. It was really powerful and it have me shivers down my back. I really liked the simplicity of it and how ...

Hey littleauthor here, I thought this was pretty good for a Prolog. You did have a run on sentence (the second sentence) and many spelling errors. Most of the time ...

Hey little author here, I thought this was a very beautiful and powerful poem. Just like what misscaroline said, I'm learning about the holocaust in history right now. I think ...

Hey little author here, This poem is completely and utterly beautiful. It made me feel happy for this couple and how much they really care about each other. It was ...

Hey little author here, Aww this is a really sweet poem. Unlike the others, I thought it was a perfect size. It covered all the topic in those 8 lines ...

Hey little author here, Well isn't this a nasty piece. This was so realistic I almost wanted to curl up in the corner and just stay as far away from ...

Hey little author here, Aww this is a really cute poem. When I started reading it the song "I will survive" was running though my head. I thought this poem ...

Hey little author here, Since the people before me have already told you off about the errors, I'll tell you about the good in this short story. It was very ...

Hey little author here, Well this is a nasty poem. I thought it was beautiful and just plain horrible at same time. Seeing that you have enough people pointing out ...

Hey little author here, So I loooove this poem. It reminds me so much of me when I was younger and I thought it was very beautiful. I noticed that ...

Hey little author here, So I love dark poems like this and I thought it was very well written. The first letter of each line should be capitalized and the ...

Hey little author here, I could really relate to this poem, well I think everyone could. I thought it was well written but now for the part that know one ...

Hey little author here! This was a really sweet poem :3. I do agree with paula about giving this to a the girl you like, if this for a special ...