little_miss_obsessed

Chorus: How can I explain my heart Why do I keep smiling Does everything seem this clear Could it be I could be bewitched ‘Cause I just saw a face ...

this is adorable. only problem i have is that it confuses me when someone doesnt use the same constant rhyme scheme throughout a poem (with the exception of free verse, ...

oh, the 90s. good times, good times. 90s nickelodeon was especially the best. and the fashion everyone wore, oh my. i miss those says =/ anyways, i'd say this song ...

i love the whole message of this poem. i find it very easy to relate to. and it's good for you to get your feelings out in such a humane ...

this is a bit short, but that's ok. if you put in some punctuation, it would make it a lot better. and i don't really understand what the message of ...

the only criticism i have is that it doesn't really seem to have any rhythn/meter. it doesn't matter that it doesn't rhyme. and try breaking it up and adding some ...

this is really good. i like how you broke it up. there were a few parts that i didn't quite understand, like "i don't want to be another damsel on ...

this is a very sweet song and i'm sure whoever it's written about will love you forever for writing it :P hahaha. one problem i've got with this: you use ...

If you only knew me from the heart, You would know what I’m going through. When I saw you from the start I knew I would never win. i would ...

i find this song very relatable to. what's written about is very real. i like how it all flows so nicely; its not necessary to know the music for it. ...

Stabbed me in the back, or the lung, so to say, so that all of my determination, my willpower, is shattered. This is the only flawed part of this piece ...

wow. your story is unique in many ways. it amazes me, the skills you have. i love the little quirks in it, like the balloon car, having a king, the ...