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This is beautifully written and expresses some of the thoughts that gather in my mind sometimes. Very good job!!!

This poem is so poetically beautiful!!!! I think that you should keep writing, you make such awesome poems!!! This one is my favorite!!! I would love to live in that ...

Very, very good!!! You put into words the exact same feelings that I have!!!!

I love it. awesome and very poetic at the same time. But not in the regular poetic way, more of in your own style. And thats exactly what I love ...

The reason that I don't use grammar is because I think, in my taste, the poem flows better. Periods only make you stop and then go. But I want the ...

Pretty much sums up what I think when I go outside. I love the last three lines.

I love this poem, it has perfect imagery to me. I can't give out any nitpicks because I am not a grammar queen. All I can say is that I ...

I love your poem, its awesome. It really describes that feeling, and it has simply perfect imagery!!! I really like the first lines, and the metaphors are my favorite part!! ...

I really liked the imagery in your poem, that's the best thing to happen in a poem, I think that you should have added more because I would have liked ...

I love your poem, it has a great sense of imagery. I can't say my favorite lines because I loved every single one. I was hypnotized by the words, they ...

It was good, the things that I noticed were already pointed out. Other than that it is good, I think this is the first science fiction that I have read. ...

I love it!!!!!! Great idea for a poem, I fell for it!!

This is good, but not really descriptions in it. I would really like to know more about the twins and the Mariah. I think that you should add more to ...

This script is very random, I like it though.

I am here, as you requested, and I really love this. I am going to read all of the chapters, though maybe not in one day. Good job on the ...