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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: all the pretty things

    Considering all of the reviews you've gotten, nothing else can really be said about your piece. To me it was perfect, I enjoyed reading it!!

    Aug 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: unstoppable you

    I love this its so good. Thats what I see in you. You are unstopable.

    Aug 22, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: If you're talking to the moon

    I was confused at the first part, but other than that I really loved reading this. It makes you think!!

    Aug 19, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Im Too Young For Love

    This poem is very goo. I loved reading it!!! It was amazing!!

    Aug 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: To Them Bunch Of Haters Out There!

    Some of your gramatical errors take away from the feel you are trying to get by writing this poem.But other than that your poem really is awesome!!

    Aug 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: What if?

    This is beautiful!!!!!!! I loved it What if I ran away? Never looked back and kept running forward, until I was out of breath. This is my favorite quote!!

    Aug 17, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Dream Big

    This poem is amazingly awesome!!

    Aug 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: That Night

    This is so touching and so so sad. the imagery was good enough to make me tear up. You did an amazing job writing this, your poem deserved to be ...

    Aug 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Seas of deception

    This poem is beautiful!!!!

    Aug 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Has Been Deleted

    I love this!!!!!!

    Aug 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Cage

    This poem. is.epic!! First off, you have amazing imagery, and the rhyming pattern really compliments the poem!! I couldn't find any mistakes, but that's because I'm not really a nitpicker. ...

    Aug 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re:

    I really love this!! Great imagery!!!!

    Aug 16, 2011
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Knife of Never Letting Go

    I agree, this book is beautifully written, I loved reading it!! The imagery in this book is, just plain awesome!!!

    Aug 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Withering Love

    I loved reading this, so much imagery!! That's the best in a poem!! I'm glad that it was featured, I still would have read it, though, because you chose such ...

    Aug 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Hello

    Did you guys ever think that this poem was meant for emotion. If you were surprised or happy or scared, you would do that too.

    Aug 10, 2011


I wondered why we put villains in our stories when we have plenty of them in real life; then I realized that maybe we wanted stories where the good guy wins.
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