Published August 16, 2011
Dream Big
Open Your
Eyes
And
See
Try
To
Touch
The
Sky
Try
To
Flow Like The Sea
Be
Happy
As a bird
Dream Big
You
Can
Do It
Don't
Be
Down
Get
Proud
Be You
I Can
Just
Dream
BIG!!!! 
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I like the poem, though it was choppy. With every word seperated it was hard to grasp the concept of the poem. I would creat a Stanza for this poem, and I know ou can amke one! Also make the sentences longer and add a rhyme to it, so it would be more intresting, you know.
One big thing for poems are punctuation. Yes, even in poems there has to be puntuations. This just seems like a long sentence that doesn't fit together that well.
That is a sentence, well to me it sounds like one. Because of the next word after that list doesn't quite correspond to each other. You know, it'll be something like this. : Dream big, open your eyes and see try. That just doesn't sound very good next to each other. Other than that, that was the only thing that I stumbled upon. Good job, and keep working on your poems! ^^
This poem is amazingly awesome!!
You have a nice poem... But that on part does not make any sense. Also cutting the lines so much made it hard to read. Nice try!
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I love it it was so good.