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Right away, the simplicity of the title grew me alongside the bio that gives a very interesting, complex topic that is trans identity. It can be rather interesting to see ...

I just have to say that this has got to be one of the most creative takes on thunder & lightning and their relationship as a metaphor I've come across. ...

What a lovely poem!! I love how vulnerable this is. The poem doesn't need to expand on the main topic that is love and the desire to be loved in ...

Helloooo!!! this is a great first chapter!! right away, the setting is so interesting; while somewhat ambiguous for you to wonder, it isn't too vague to not quip any interest!! ...

Hello!! I really like how active this poem is, while taking its time to be playful with its rhythm and imagery! Through the language, I get a sense of determination ...

Gosh, this poem is just amazing!! So good written when it comes to its commentary. It's uncomfortable as it should be, but the writing doesn't lean towards being more descriptive ...

Hello!!! While usually this platform is used as a "comfort escape" from politics for many others, it is refreshing for works that tackle on race and racism to be published ...

Hellloooo!! This is quite an intriguing poem that's an interesting introduction to your piece that's a work in progress! The established topic here, loss (memories), is executed really great through ...

Helloooooo!! This is such a great, beautiful poem!!! This gives such a lovely glimpse into this deep, passionate love that isn't too idealized, which makes this poem very grounded! The ...

hello! this is a great chapter! This chapter, perhaps the overall story as well, seems to revolve around a girl named Maristella who is willing to fight against the world ...

Hello!!! This is a great introduction to the story!! This start introduces the themes & topics revolving around emotional & verbal abuse from family members, the anxiety and trauma that ...

Within the shortness of it all, comes a great pacing and flow that makes reading this very fulfilling. There are many elements to this story that makes it so easy ...

Hello!!! First off welcome to the website- i haven't seen you until now! I hope you enjoy it here!!! This poem is just so, in a sense, freeing, and I ...

Hi!!! So far, this is a great teaser to another part! I found that the ending quipped my curiosity, especially due to how ambiguous the line is. It could be ...

Hello! Nice story you have going on! First, we're introduced to text that describe itself as a content warning. Not only that, the trigger warnings are wrap in this poetic ...