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Re: Cheap Cigarettes
Heyo! Your friendly neighborhood ladcat, here for a review! That. Was. HAUNTING. I mean seriously that hit me so hard! It was amazing! Not a single grammatical mistake, great descriptions, ...
Jul 18, 2016 -
Re: Character Names List
Review to get it out of the green room: Nice names. Very exotic. Quite fetching. Superb, includes every letter of the alphabet and the two generic genders plus some gender ...
Jul 18, 2016 -
Re: there are no words
Hey! Your friendly neighborhood grumpy cat is here for a review. Bruh. This hit me hard. I've had a rough year, struggling with a diagnosis of ADHD and the anxiety/depression/unhealthy ...
Jul 16, 2016 -
Re: 3 am Art
Wow, this is so beautiful! This struck a chord within me. I love nighttime, I'm a night owl and I never go to sleep until at least midnight if not ...
Jul 16, 2016 -
Re: First Verse: The Meeting
Okay! I officially love this poem, it's cute, it has a nice consistent rhyme and rhythm which I love, the message is clear, it tells a story, and it's descriptive. ...
Jul 16, 2016 -
Re: One Crazy Night
Okay that's pretty funny. At first I wasn't sure what the point of 'that earthy smell in the shower' was but you brought it full circle at the end, which ...
Jul 16, 2016 -
Re: River God
BOOM *appears in a rush of smoke* I am here to review. First of all, I freaking love your imagery. It's superb. It's breathtaking. It's so alive I could reach ...
Nov 4, 2015 -
Re: The Perfect Storm
BOOOM *appears in a rush of smoke and the black swirl of a cape* I have come to review thy work, puny mortal. For starters, I would like to applaud ...
Nov 3, 2015 -
Re: A Shooting Star
BOOM *appears in a dramatic cascade of smoke* Hi there! Welcome to YWS. I hope you like it, I know I do! So I like this little rhyme. It's very ...
Jan 28, 2015 -
Re: Twisted Lives.
BOOM *appears in a dramatic flare of smoke* But not nearly as dramatic as your poem! By god but this is great. I love it I love it I love ...
Jan 14, 2015 -
Re: The REAL
BOOM *appears in a dramatic flash of smoke* To be perfectly honest, I stopped reading about three paragraphs in. I think you have some inspired imagery and some strong points ...
Jan 12, 2015 -
Re: REDACTED
BOOM *appears in a dramatic flash of smoke* OMG it's sheer poetry! You just made me cry there when you said "Something..." I swear, one of the most beautiful things ...
Jan 12, 2015 -
Re: Fragrance of Heaven
BOOM *appears in a dramatic flash of smoke* I think you did this very well. Your imagery is very beautiful, and you get the right tone across. Only two nitpicks: ...
Jan 12, 2015 -
Re: Captured in Time- Prologue
BOOM *appears in a dramatic flash of smoke* Alright, first of all I want to say that coming into this I was thinking "Is it a Tardis? Is this a ...
Jan 11, 2015 -
Re: A Ten Point Program to Creating Meaning in Absurdity
BOOM *Appears in a dramatic flare of smoke* I don't know what the heck this is but I love it. The repetition of the two lines "I found the key ...
Jan 10, 2015
