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  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Stars That Confess

    Greetings, Kanome! I am a huge fan of anime, as well, and I really enjoyed this poem of yours. I don't know what anime it's based on, but, by the ...

    Mar 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: The Eleventh Hour

    This is Kman134 and I'm here to review your work. I can say that this poem is very epic and suspenseful, symbolizing the unknown that dwells within the darkness. As ...

    Mar 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: (late) Valentine's day poem

    This late Valentine Poem made me a little depressed. I can see the imagery of "Pink and Red" as to show the desperation of how one tries to please the ...

    Mar 8, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Crowne's Perspective

    I like this short story! A General who has temporary amnesia wakes up and realizes he is in another world and the shocking part is that he's in another man's ...

    Feb 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: All riches and no earning

    This is a very interesting poem. The way it was written seems very classical and how the style is so distinct. It's like reading a modern day Shakespearean poem set ...

    Feb 12, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: and the lone girl in rome

    This poem, I like. It really captures the fall of Rome and the battle that took place during its destruction. I like how one little girls saw the whole entire ...

    Feb 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: Followed by a Red Truck, or Successful Exorcism

    This is a very interesting poem. I enjoyed how it reflects the feelings all women have when they're alone, or when they are around places filled with men. It, also, ...

    Feb 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Japan

    This is very interesting. A poem about forgiveness and about Japan. There not many poems about Japan on this site. First part, I can feel the sympathy and empathy festering ...

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Pause/Play

    Hello, this is Kman134, and I'm here to say that this is a very interesting short story you have. It was very enjoyable to read. The first part talks about ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Ding, Dong, Ding

    Hi, this is Kman134, and I must say that i find your poem very interesting. I loved how you described the city of London with such eerie details. The details ...

    Dec 22, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: At the playground.

    Hi, this is Kman134, here to review your work: First off, I really enjoyed this poem; although the title mislead me. I thought it would be a story about childhood ...

    Dec 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Yet I Do Not Fight

    A shell of ones former self taken advantage of his/her friend or lover. It sickens me how people could do such a thing to a human being. Friendship and love ...

    Dec 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Just because

    This a very interesting piece. the first part reminds me of a dysfunctional family with an abusive father, a submissive mother, and a daughter who wants to get away from ...

    Dec 22, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Basket Case

    Yes; the lost of a loved one can drive a person into the depths of despair and madness. You keep saying that she is not gone, but you must accept ...

    Dec 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Heart of Mine

    I think this is a very interesting work. Although, it's a little short, it is still astonishing, yet amusing. I like the use of metaphors in the poem. "Lunar sun, ...

    Dec 22, 2013


Nobody wants to see the village of the happy people.
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