klennon14

Oooohh. "He’s a great liar. Honest." I love this line. It just cuts right through you. Hi there, I'm here for a review! I like the setting and how the ...

Hi there, here for a review! First of all, beautiful poem. You are very talented, and you create unique phrases. Structurally speaking, I think we need to work on a ...

Wow, from the first line you had me! Hi there, here for a quick review! :) First and foremost: Loveddd it! Terrific poem! I love how it encompasses so many ...

Hi there, here for a review! :) "Who smiles when nobody's watching, And hurts when everyone is--" I respectfully disagree with the reviewer below. I actually really like this part ...

Hi there, here with a review! Don't mind any of my nitpicking. You can do whatever you please with my opinions. :) To start, I really enjoyed this poem. The ...

Hi there! Here to review your screenplay. :) I don't know much about screenwriting. I wrote a play once in my high school creative writing class...but I do know I ...

Wow, love the symbolism here! A shock absorber is a bold symbolizer to take on, but I think you tackled it well! There's a few technical things that could be ...

Hi there! So before I dive in here, let me forewarn you I'm a nitpicker. Don't take any of my criticism to heart, it's just my opinion and you are ...

Hello there, here to review your poem! Wow!!! That's all I can really say. I have nothing to critique you for, because this is just flawless. The raw emotion just ...

Hello there! I've always been intrigued by the idea of bucket lists, which is what made me attracted to your poem. You do a wonderful job of keeping the whole ...

Hello there, Pocket! I'm here to review your piece. There isn't much to critique, because this poem is nearly flawless! I loved everything about it, from the way you break ...

Hello there! I'd just like to say that the title drew me in! Great choice with that. Okay, so I know this is just your rough copy. I ran into ...

Hi, I'm here to review your poem. :) First of all, I would like to say that this is beautiful! The rhythm is just about perfect, the word choice is ...

Hello there, ChocolateCello! It's klennon here, Kali, to review your piece :) I really love the line "The shards of green dance with the specs of brown, they circle her ...

Hello there! Here with a review. Two things we should get out of the way first, well, maybe three. 1) I'm a nitpicker. Everything I say is just advice/suggestions so ...