kitrosemon13

This poem is very lovely I only found two very small errors in this: This illusion of love i'd try to remember, you'd try to forget. -i'd should be I'd ...

Well, first and far most of it when I was reading this I felt like after every 3 words or so you'd skip a line. When writers do that they ...

I loved everything about this poem, I liked how you opened up with the word rain and ended with the word rain. It does describe rain but I felt you ...

Okay, I liked the haiku's very much. Only a few nitpicks I think you should change: Silence is beauty As all is now rendered still -now should be know, yes ...

I was a bit let down by the flow of it, it seemed choppy and you used too many commas and it made it a little difficult to read. The ...

This was an okay poem I did not feel it much at all though, try helping the reader see what you are seeing, we cannot see inside your head (: ...

I enjoy reading all of your works but this one was my favorite. Though it did not have much imagery I liked the flow of it, it made me laugh ...

I merely skimmed through this, it seems like your writing about someone named Sara and you seem upset. But I don't see the emotions, you say you cry and your ...

Some parts confused me when I read this, somehow in parts your rhymes were sort of off. It was like you were forcing the poem into rhyme. The repetition in ...

Hey, Evi! Wow, I'm a huge fan of google, lol. This poem is so true that I'm still smiling from reading this. And like a few said though, it seems ...

I like the idea of this poem, but I do not like that you have no punctuation whatsoever. Here is something that caught my eye off the bat: I wrapped ...

Hello! A few things I want to tell you about the poem is, I love how you bold the words I sort of get a good description of what you ...

I loved your title, thats what drew me into this. I liked it a little though, this poem did not do anything to my emotions to say the least. The ...

You captured me by your title. Now normally when I see a poem this long I'd most likely skip over it. But this, my friend, is what poetry is! I ...

I was not feeling this poem very much, it was lacking some sort of awe I was looking for. Most likely because I am a huge vampire fan and I ...