kinzygirl223

I really like this poem because i've honestly never thought about it that way before. I think this is really good. Next time i will stop and smile.

I really liked it. At times it could get confusing. But i liked the voice. Good. :)

I really liked the repittion to start out. I thought it was really good. It had a TON of feeling in it. Very good. :)

THat was a very powerful poem. I loved it. THe only thing is where are you?? Thats the only problem i have with it. Otherwise it is a FANTASTIC poem. ...

I liked this poem. I thought it was good. I dont really have any suggestions. Sorry.....

Wow. I thought this was really good. I really liked the MUAH part. I thought it showed voice and enthusiam. I wouldnt change anything but just consider revisiing gramer

WOW. Intense. I really liked it. I dont have much to say. This almost mad me cry though soooo good job.

hmmm. It was interesting. Very good word choice or placement i guess. sorry im not more help. And in the last stanza you said hink instead of Think.

WOW. This was really good. Spelling..... I know everyone has said that but yeah. I loved it though. It was kind of scary and really intense. :))))

All these helped thank you sooo much.

WOW!!! I loved this poem I think it is AMAZING!!! I wish I had a better Critique but i don't sorry. LOVED IT

I loved this poem. I seriously felt like crying. It has soo much meaning. I loved it.

This was really good..... I liked it. Hmmm this is a sucky review but yeah. I dont have any suggestions.

Thanks for reviewing I will think about those changes!!

Hmmm. I like it but i dont really get it. It has a good flow and every thing. I don't know. Is it meant for the reader to imagine what ...