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Re: Heart of a Ship
lol i meant to say "missles" whoops! thank you for pointing that out to me and all of your suggestions!
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: What We Have Turned Into
Hey! This is an awesome poem! I really enjoyed how you separated the stanzas so much and it makes it stand out a lot. I totally agree with what you ...
Sep 16, 2015 -
Re: Endangered
"A promise concealed in tears, reflects patterns of wonders to be, plastering confidence that settles all sears. . Until the last tear trails, . with a glistering dance, . falling ...
Sep 16, 2015 -
Re: Culture Gone Wrong
Thank you!
Sep 15, 2015 -
Re: Culture Gone Wrong
Thanks!:)
Sep 15, 2015 -
Re: Culture Gone Wrong
Thank you for your help and ideas!:)
Sep 15, 2015 - Re: Sad teens with happy faces- intro Sep 14, 2015
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Re: Leave Me [please.]
WOW! You are so talented this piece is so great and meaningful! I see you going far with our writing in the future.
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: Our Dream
This is hard for me to analyze...I really like this poem though. Very relatable and well thought out!
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: Bestfriends..
Oh my goodness! All I want to do is read more and i cannot wait for you to continue working on this and share some more! I love dramatic relationship ...
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: Break my Heart
I really like the rhyme scheme in this poem! I like how it is noticeable but it is not every line in each stanza!
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: short-lived
So thoughtful! Very mindful poem!
Sep 12, 2015 -
Re: Delete
This is so beautiful!
Sep 12, 2015 -
Re: Delete
This is so beautiful!
Sep 12, 2015 -
Re: Soul Connection
This poem is beautiful and strong
Sep 11, 2015
