User avatar

kenziefavaloro

  • Article / Essay » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Heart of a Ship

    lol i meant to say "missles" whoops! thank you for pointing that out to me and all of your suggestions!

    Sep 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: What We Have Turned Into

    Hey! This is an awesome poem! I really enjoyed how you separated the stanzas so much and it makes it stand out a lot. I totally agree with what you ...

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Endangered

    "A promise concealed in tears, reflects patterns of wonders to be, plastering confidence that settles all sears. . Until the last tear trails, . with a glistering dance, . falling ...

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Culture Gone Wrong

    Thank you!

    Sep 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Culture Gone Wrong

    Thanks!:)

    Sep 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Culture Gone Wrong

    Thank you for your help and ideas!:)

    Sep 15, 2015
  • Other » Health, Realistic Re: Sad teens with happy faces- intro

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Leave Me [please.]

    WOW! You are so talented this piece is so great and meaningful! I see you going far with our writing in the future.

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Our Dream

    This is hard for me to analyze...I really like this poem though. Very relatable and well thought out!

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Bestfriends..

    Oh my goodness! All I want to do is read more and i cannot wait for you to continue working on this and share some more! I love dramatic relationship ...

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Break my Heart

    I really like the rhyme scheme in this poem! I like how it is noticeable but it is not every line in each stanza!

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: short-lived

    So thoughtful! Very mindful poem!

    Sep 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Delete

    This is so beautiful!

    Sep 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Delete

    This is so beautiful!

    Sep 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Soul Connection

    This poem is beautiful and strong

    Sep 11, 2015


My life's goal is to end up between YWS quotes on bottom of the page, so some part of me will be able to live forever here.
— AnotherCrowInRow