kazza

This is really effective - how you have repeated 'you' so many times!! Well done ~ Kazza

Loving how you've explained the whole idea, creating the image in my mind is most wonderful! Congratulations on such a wonderful creation!

JUST BEAUTIFUL - sad but true I am impressed how you have explained the love, the use of simile and metaophors - the adjectives, very well done, impressed indeed! ~ ...

I love how it is set out down the page, how it is trimmed with no cuttings left. Beautiful how people craft these things - wise, knowledgeable - for both ...

This is good for a first time! Vocab - check, Capitalization ? No, in poems, on every line you use a capital whether or not it's a new start, commas ...

Heartbreaking, Heartaching, This review is simply is utterly completely BRILLIANT - I love your ideas, your thoughts, the ways in which you write them down, poems are one thing this ...

This was very much needed to understand your chapters however it was good to imagine ourselves so you have improved upon my imagination! The dictionary is a great idea, uses ...

This really pulses with feelings and emotional secrets just bursting to full. So creative! Well done, I'm really seeing how much it angers you about fake love, and how love ...

Amazing, this really describes inner emotion, lost love, the fact you've come to realise you're in such a wonderful place to come to conclusion that you will fall to your ...

Catchy lyrics - mouthy too, I found it difficult to place a tune but really, wonderful literacy - English. Your vocab is vast and it's obvious what sort of tune ...

Amazing, short, simple, effective. I hope this really sort out well with things, I sang it in a slow, sad tune, dragging on some of the words. It really worked ...

Simply amazing, turned me right into singing mode, I sang along to it, got it wrong, went to the start - if you ever want to hear it, anyway, not ...

Wow! I really drummed up a tune as I read this through - loving the lyrics! It makes me laugh sometimes but kid, you have talent - do you play ...

Brilliant, I thoroughly enjoyed this story - it reminds me of a program, anyway about the story, it simply an amazing idea that has kept its interest the whole way ...

Pretty nice, neat work here Blackwood! I love how you've started each verse with "In this absence of pain" The only thing is, that in poems, each sentence should start ...