kattee

Hello there, From what I've noticed, this is leaning more towards an essay than poetry. I find little imagery in here. Moreover, people choose to remove punctuations in their poems ...

Hello there! This was a dark poem; the dread that comes with isolation and loneliness. Honestly, this is relatable because of the ongoing quarantine and self-distancing. We're all left with ...

Hello there! One of my favorite genres is sci-fi with dystopia, war, or rebellion as its topping. Though short, this was gripping. Kudos to you for generating a brand new ...

Hello there! This seems interesting. However (I know you've explained that you're publishing the story per page), it seems off-putting to end a "step" by introducing your friends. I saw ...

Hello there! The suspense was intense. The experience I had when I read it for the first and the second time was the same. I was so caught by your ...

Hello there! I see that you're trying to floor out a sad backstory for your character. This is a typical storyline but don't be disheartened. Cliche plot lines are always ...

Hello there! I don't know if this is a creative or an academic essay, so I decided to view it as an academic one since essays are usually like that. ...

Hello there! Your poem is nice. It's trying to evoke that loss of hope or despair due to heartbreak. It has a lot of potential in it. I just have ...

Hello Nands (can I call you that?)! I think your poem is a great start or first stanza :)I like the spiritual approach in your poem but I suggest adding ...

I would like to commend you. This poem was stylistic and filled with effort. Every line has 11 syllables in total, plus the use of a creative pattern: ababcbcdcdedefefgfg. It ...

Hello there! Your poem is so unique and it's quite interesting. I don't see a lot of poems dedicated to food so this was truly a breath of fresh air. ...

Hello there! First of all, I would like to commend the usage of the word "Fables" that pertains to the story of these rebels. It's an implication that these people ...

Good day! I love the pandora's box-inspired poem you got here! I love how you use it as some sort of conduit between the speaker and this "you." I have ...

Hello there! I planned to create a review for your poem, especially as a thank you for reviewing mine's. However, I participated in Camp NaNoWriMo yesterday so I focused more ...

Good day! I like what you're trying to say in the story, but there is a problem in terms of coherence, build-up, and how you tried creating the world. First ...