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Re: Two poems of nihilism
Hiya! It's Mack just dropping by with a review for ya!! First off, these were very interesting poems that you've written. I gotta say that, in my opinion, I feel ...
Jan 30, 2020 -
Re: In the Coral Waves
Hiya~! It's Mack just dropping by with a review!! I've never seen anything like this poem before so not only was this a really good read but it was also ...
Jan 30, 2020 -
Re: [deleted]
Hiya, it's Mack dropping by with a quick review~! This is an interesting little poem that you've written here and I really enjoyed reading it. I liked the use of ...
Jan 29, 2020 -
Re: Your Eyes
I really really like this~! It's so short but clearly describes the emotions that are being evoked. I especially adore the line "The lightning passes from your eyes, just freeze ...
Jan 29, 2020 -
Re: Last Year's Toys
This is really well written and all too relatable. You used a really good metaphor between forgotten toys and forgotten friends. I've been in this situation more than once and ...
Dec 8, 2019 -
Re: Short Hair
Hiya, just dropping by with a review :) I could feel the dissolving confidence in this as I read each line. I understand the difficulty of loving yourself and your ...
Dec 8, 2019 -
Re: Bleach and Lemons
hiya! I'm just passing by with a review! this is an incredibly interesting poem that you've created here. I've never seen or read anything quite like it and I adore ...
Nov 5, 2019 -
Re: Spring Disguise
Oh I love this!! It's so incredibly descriptive and every word is so clearly carefully chosen. I love the imagery and the ideas presented in this! Really really well written ...
Nov 5, 2019 -
Re: The Struggle Is real
Hiya, it's Mack just dropping by with a review! First, I really did enjoy this poem. It's an accurate reflection of a lot of the things we see in the ...
Nov 5, 2019 -
Re: Nothing but a country song
Damn, I love this. It's descriptive and emotional and hit a little spot on my heart really hard. You did a really good job with this poem and conveying your ...
Oct 3, 2019 -
Re: “you’re my world.”
Hiya! Just dropping in with a review!:D I gotta say, I really really love this. Most poetry is conformed to structure or rhyming patterns that define it as poetry, otherwise ...
Oct 3, 2019 -
Re: seconds passing by
Hi! This is quite interesting and I've had to read it a few times over again to even begin to try and understand it. I like your imagery but I'm ...
Sep 22, 2019 -
Re: Binary.
Hiya! Just popped in to say that this poem is incredible!! I love the form because it's something I haven't seen before which is interesting and new and made the ...
Sep 22, 2019 -
Re: flowers 1.0
Hi! I just have to say that I really really really like this poem!! It's very free form and flows quite nicely which is perfect for the message that you're ...
Sep 19, 2019 -
Re: Through her coloured eyes
This is terrifying... and I love it. It's detailed and interesting and creates an absolutely horrifying image in my head. The only issue I have is the inconsistency with the ...
Sep 16, 2019
