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Re: Dissolution
Haha, well, congratulations on your leap of faith!! I remember when I first shared something really personal. It's a rush, isn't it? Haha, I've had those times, glad I caught ...
Jan 26, 2016 -
Re: The Gates of Hell
Hello! It's been a while since you commented on this, but I've begun to get a drive to continue this story, and I started by tweaking around this part first. ...
Jan 24, 2016 -
Re: Rock bottom to Almighty
No intrustion! Thanks for the review, and to expand, it is a more experience based poem, but it isn't just one person and it was never a person I'd met ...
Dec 13, 2015 -
Re: Black Holes
I didn't realize how much opnion I wrote. oops. It seemed a lot shorter when I was typing XD. Oh well, but yea, that isn't too bad. I think thats ...
Dec 12, 2015 -
Re: My Old Friend
Haha, thanks!! I really enjoy the fact you like the different topic. I tend to do things like this pretty often. I thought of putting it in poetry but it ...
Dec 11, 2015 -
Re: Happy Mothers Day, Mommy
Thanks so much :) I normally have a few typos due to my fast typing and I'm glad my ideas are new :) I'm not sure why i thought of ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: I have nothing left now...(Chapter 1)
Thanks! Im working on chapter 3 right now, so here is the link to chapter Thanks for the critique! It is really good and I'll get right to editing :)
Jun 2, 2013 -
Re: My Curse eased my pain
Oh,that would be awesome! I was thinking that as I wrote it, wondering ways of how I could lengthen this out over the first two chapters or so and then....oh ...
Apr 14, 2013 -
Re: No..way...; Part one
Oh did I rush! Hehe,the idea just popped into my head and I didn't want to forget anything so I kind of rushed then got to tired to revise it. ...
Apr 6, 2013 -
Re: No..way...; Part one
Thanks for the review! I wouldn't mind another after I revise this one, and thanks for the quotes! It helps a lot with editing stuff and I'll be sure to ...
Apr 6, 2013 -
Re: Insanity
Yea,it is realistic but I did not have time to accurately place it. thank you,and Ill be sure to fix those.
Apr 1, 2013 -
Re: My Life's Worth
Don't worry,I'm good at typing, but we have the same problem, sometimes I got 'HOme' or something like that, and normally my mess ups are due to my fast typing.
Mar 28, 2013 -
Re: I wasnt ready...
Thank you for the critique! Not harsh but,I do have one question...'Your dress, pooled around you, catches fire from a stray ember,' what was the spelling error??
Mar 10, 2013 -
Re: I wasnt ready...
thanks ;) I should edit but...its my lazy day xD
Mar 9, 2013 -
Re: She Wants Revenge
um....no? Why? Im not trying to make it perfect but it could be improved
Mar 6, 2013