Dissolution

Alright,first off I love this, as was said underneath it is a fancy poem. I hope you share more of these!
I'd like to suggest a possible solution to the 'run-on sentence problem' that does not require punctuation... Here goes.
I'd suggest putting breaks into the poem and making stanzas, as this doesn't affect the integrity of the poem but makes it look better, and can add emphasis if done correctly. I'm going to put down how I would do it so you can have an example to look at to see what I mean. I hope it helps!!!

I want to form crop circles upon your neck
and whisper heinous melodies into your breath
I want to impair your porcelain
and blend your blessed health with my helpless fortune

I desire to delectably arc and bend and bow
and taunt and tease and devour
the regulations of saints
that dismember our unholy association

I am melting into your cerulean pools of heroine
Like crystalline demons
they infuse me with ecstasy

The very reflection of your fire
juxtaposed to my imaginative inclemency
is a ravenous fiend
to my erroneous innocence

I want to trace lullabies
along the folds of your lifeblood
and inundate your intermissions
with vehemence and fury

I am intoxicated by the bile of your musk
and consumed by the depths of your lyrics
My qualities of brilliance, wit, and sense
are dull compared to your latent sagacity

Your ribbons of corruption are commanding
Like a lantern to an insect
my instruments of abstraction
are held dotingly captive

Each moment in this dance of misery
I will count my blessings until another
And I will hold dear our insanity
in the doomed hope of a promiscuous reality

This may not be something you want to do, however it works surprisingly well as there is only one stanza with 3, instead of 4. It can be done in other ways or not at all. I just thought it might help! Really great poem you have here.

Hello there!! Kam here with a review! I'm sorry if it is a bit lacking or confusing. I just wrote a long chapter to something I'm working on and my brain's not only a little dead but a bit achey! Hope I do good!

I'm going to start off with grammar things, spelling mistakes,etc.

To start, I notice there really aren't a lot of errors, per se, but there are a lot of missed things. Like punctuation and capitalization. Now, I like the look of the beginning of a sentence to have a capital letter in my poems, but it isn't necessary. I like the way it looks now, except for the fact when you read it out it is like one really long run on sentence. So add some periods or commas to it. Like...

I want to form crop circles upon your neck
and whisper heinous melodies into your breath.
I want to impair your porcelain
and blend your blessed health with my helpless fortune.
I desire to delectably arc and bend and bow
and taunt and tease and devour
the regulations of saints
that dismember our unholy association.

Like that. Take a breath. No need to rush through everything. Also, in the sentence
"I desire to delectably arc and bend and bow" is sort of unclear. I understand what you're trying to say but maybe go more for...
"I desire the delectable arc and bend and bow..."
Just switch a couple words around and it'll flow much smoother.

In the 4th to last line you seem to be missing a y in misery. It is spelled miser. :3

Okay. I'm done with that, my eyes are crossing and I'm just done with most of the spelling/grammar errors if there are any more xD

Onto my favorite part: The parts I like!!

I like the whole poem. I really do. It's a little dirty but it's a fancy dirty. You use a lot of really good vocabulary to describe the sensual feeling between two star crossed lovers in imminent danger of being discovered in the middle of their moonlight tango. I seriously love the forbidden sense that's described repeatedly in this poem. I can't say much that I don't like, mostly cause there isn't really anything I do not like. It's is a very straight forward and well written poem.

You could rewrite a few parts liiiiike....
"I am melting into your cerulean pools of heroine
Like crystalline demons
they infuse me with ecstasy"
too
"I am melting into you cerulean pool of heroine
Whom, like crystalline demons,
Infuse me with ecstasy"

I feel like it flows a little better but whether or not you chance it is up to you because, regardless, it is still a very well written poem.

If you have any questions just ask! I'm going to go vegetate and probably fall asleep because my brain hurts XD Keep writing, you're quite good!!
~Kam