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Re: ode to a bagel crumb stuck in my thoat
Hi Momo! hannah here for a quick review. I hope it is helpful! This poem was really funny, it was simple and made me laugh out loud. Only someone who ...
May 25, 2021 -
Re: Color Haikus
Hello FireEyes! hannah here for a quick review. Haha wow, this was so cool. Colors are perfect for haiku's and these were really cool and poetic and I didn't find ...
May 24, 2021 -
Re: My Family Experienced a Deadly Car Crash
Hi PhoenixEmberly, @hannah0528 here for a quick review! I hope you are having a good day/night/morning/evening/afternoon, where ever you are. I hope this is helpful! Grows: "I glanced toward the ...
May 13, 2021 -
Re: Horses
Hi Phillauthet! Hope you are having a good day/night/afternoon/evening/morning. @hannah0528 here with a quick, hopefully helpful review. I hope you like it! Grows: "Grooming them is a joy. Brushing th
May 13, 2021 -
Re: love letter to [CLICK HERE TO READ MORE]
Hi alliyah, Meshugenah, chikara and whatchamacallit! hannah0528 here for a quick review. I hope it is helpful! Wow, this was brilliant and it made me crack up. I hope it ...
May 10, 2021 -
Re: I breathe brazenly
Hi whatchamacallit! hannah here for a quick review. I hope it is helpful! Ooh wow, this was so fun to read! I don't even know what to say, it was ...
May 10, 2021 -
Re: School Drama
Hi Rubes! Hannah here for a quick review. I hope it is helpful! Grows: I noticed that you changed the spelling of Lizzy's name periodically: "Lizzy..." and then: "Lizzie..." Maybe ...
May 10, 2021 -
Re: dream to be gone
Hi soundofmind! hannah0528 here for a quick review. I hope it is helpful! Grows: Well this isn't a mistake but could you do a vocaroo recording of it? It is ...
May 4, 2021 -
Re: For The Want Of Bread And Jam
Hi Niveda! Hannah here for a quick review. I hope it doesn't sound stupid and is helpful! This was really funny, it shows how people sometimes just want something little ...
May 3, 2021 -
Re: Home
Hey illy7896! hannah here for a quick review. Hope it is helpful! Wow! I loved this poem! I like how it makes everything seem deserted and empty. My favorite line ...
May 3, 2021 -
Re: Change
Hey illy7896! hannah0528 here for a quick review. I want to get my next star and was looking for some poetry and found this and I am really excited to ...
May 3, 2021 -
Re: Three Trees
Hello @TheScribe! @hannah0528 here for a review. I hope it is helpful! Grows: I couldn't really find anything XD. Glows: Oh wow! I don't know if I have ever read ...
Apr 29, 2021 -
Re: The Story Of An Introvert-4
Hello NivedaJames22! @hannah0528 here for a quick review. I am so sorry for not reviewing it earlier, got a little caught up in like XD. Well, I am here now ...
Apr 21, 2021 -
Re: Sunrise After the Rain
Hello Ichthys! @hannah0528 here for a quick review. Hope it is helpful! Grows: "The light it radiated spread gradually across each subject in its path; it lit the earth for ...
Apr 12, 2021 -
Re: nostaligia i've kept under my bed
Hello @MomoMajesty and @chikara! hannah0528 here for a review. Hope it is helpful! Grows: This was really, really good and a pleasure to read but I noticed that you spaced ...
Apr 12, 2021
