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Re: gamblers in august
Oh wow, I loved the picture you painted here. It reminded me very much of Paradise Lana Del Rey. It seems like a story of a girl who sees herself ...
Aug 2 -
Re: second hand
I see this as a poem about falling in love with someone who you probably shouldn't be falling in love with. There are the opposing pictures it paints of postive ...
Jul 8 -
Re: Teeth for the Holy
This poem is absolutely beautiful. This is the kind of writing I strive to have! It is incredibly imaginative and woeful. As I read it, I thought this would be ...
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Re: Pick and scratch
This is a simple poem sharing the feeling of self-consciousness about one's appearance. This is relatable to me as a woman who experienced teenagerhood; I was very obsessed with trying ...
Oct 17, 2025 -
Re: We, the Oppressed Ones
I think it is very important for people to continue to create art in this political climate, especially art that comments on what is going on. It seems I align ...
Jun 26, 2025 -
Re: Alone
Hello, I enjoyed this poem. It felt more like a journal entry of sorts. I have been struggling the same way recently. I just finished my own poem trying to ...
Jun 26, 2025 -
Re: Lessons in Chemistry
Hellooo this is such a fun story!
Feb 16, 2025 -
Re: A beautiful dress for LJ
This is so whimsical! I am not aware of these characters or anything creepypasta lol but your writing is very tasteful. This is a sweet short about the two on ...
Feb 16, 2025 -
Re: voiding and all consuming
First read: WOW, astounding!! The space imagery is immaculate. I'm obsessed. The way I interpret this is a mix of the idea that we as humans are made of stardust ...
Feb 16, 2025 -
Re: Oh Tainted Blood
This is an interesting point of view. I agree with all things said, of course stereotyping and pinholding people just because of where they are from is unacceptable. However, as ...
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Re: Gems and Jewels for Spirited Yule
I like this idea/material that you're working with. I struggle with this holiday because I DESPISE this consumerism-engorged society we live in and the holidays exasperate it to oblivion. Yet, ...
Dec 12, 2024 -
Re: If I could make you understand
Hello there. This is an insightful poem into the deepest thoughts in your mind. It felt like reading a piece of your diary, and I admire your vulnerability. I enjoyed ...
Dec 12, 2024 -
Re: No Escape
Ohh how terrifying! This seems to be part of a bigger story, but it still stands strong on its own! I would love to learn more about the backstory of ...
May 25, 2024 -
Re: My Last Feeling
Wow! This is crazy to me because just minutes ago I was considering writing a story on what death/heaven/afterlife would feel like! But I decided to read this short story ...
Feb 29, 2024 -
Re: Because of him
This is soul-crushing and beautiful at the same time. It reminds me of my first boyfriend, I was so taken aback at how beautiful a man could be. The beginning ...
Dec 10, 2023
