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Re: Happy Clap
Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! Well now...honestly, I don't know how I feel about this. Some parts of this ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: And for that I love you.
Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! Woah. This is good. Love it to the point where all I can think ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The day
Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! This is a very emotionally intended piece, although I can see this as a ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: What am I?
Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! I have lots of things I could say about this piece. I love the ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: That Asian Girl - A Slam Poem
Hey! It's joallover here for a review! This is deep, girl. I'm not able to specifically relate to this but being generalized as something you're not is something everyone can, ...
Mar 24, 2014 -
Re: I'll make Writers out of you
Hey! It's joallover here to say HOLY CRAP HOLY CRAP HOLY CRAP HOLY CRAP I LOOOOOOOOOVE THIS SO MUCH OH MY GOODNESS Mulan is tied for my favourite Disney film ...
Mar 23, 2014 -
Re: Falling
Hey! It's joallover here for a review! First of all, I LOVE that you put a Disney reference in this. Not only because it's Disney, but because it puts a ...
Mar 23, 2014 -
Re: God Called Her Home
It's joallover here for a review! This is sweet, it really is. I have a few nit picks to point out though :) You need to watch the repetitive word ...
Mar 23, 2014 -
Re: Deleted
It's joallover here! And all I can say is Woah. There are lines in this that I absolutely loved, almost to the point of humor. Oh, what a brave hero ...
Mar 23, 2014 -
Re: Dreams
It's joallover here for review time! So, you did a great job of capturing the essence of dreams. It is very mysterious and odd. Who knows what will come next? ...
Mar 23, 2014 -
Re: untitled
Hey! It's joallover here for a wonderful review! I love this, it is very well written. Everything becomes relevant in the end. I especially love the 'I do's in between ...
Mar 23, 2014 -
Re: Ignorance
Sometimes, the shortest works are the most powerful. That's the case for this piece right here. I have never been victim to physical abuse resulting in bruising and other sorts ...
Mar 22, 2014 -
Re: Cannibal
Beautiful and gruesome. Makes me wonder what made you write this, what your inspiration was how how you put it into such a work of art. It is a good ...
Mar 21, 2014 -
Re: goodbye
Ok, it's review time! So I found it make less sense at someplaces than others. First, I found it was a bit repetitive. Not that you actually repeated anything, just ...
Mar 20, 2014 -
Re: If I let you Love me...
It's joallover here! Just to give an honest review :) just for you! I do love the fact that you added unicorns, koodos to you, but I found it was ...
Mar 20, 2014
