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Re: I'm In Love With Who You Failed To Be
Madeline, Madeline, MADELINE. I love this so much. I've always loved your work! The first stanza is immaculate. "i’m in love with a tarnished version of you one that ceased ...
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Re: Stretch My Wings
I have yet to listen to the recording, but I love the metaphor of being able to fly; it seems like something so freeing and exhilirating. What I really like ...
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Re: Another Candle & Another Year
Wow! For your first time writing poetry, I'm super-duper impressed. A lot of the poetry I like the most is about growing up, and this piece encapsulates it very nicely. ...
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Re: Sick
Aw, I'm sorry you're not feeling well. Hopefully this review might make you feel better. You perfectly encapsulate what it really, really means to be sick, especially in school. This ...
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Re: Murder By Starlight (Part 1)
I thought this was a really interesting piece, I expected it to be sort of gritty, like a 1940s-noir film. I like that you established your piece with a detailed ...
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Re: Legends: Gladiator, Part 1, Chapter 1
Oh, my gosh. I'm a dragon fanatic, so this just made me super happy. I really like Scarlett, she's obedient when in front of her mentor, but something completely different ...
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Re: Billowing Oak
Hey! MintyLeaf here to give you a review. Let me say that I loved the imagery you conveyed in this piece. You made me feel bad for a tree, that's ...
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Re: Scribbles 1
I have no idea what this means, but it paints this...apocalyptic version of Candyland. I don't really know why..but in my head, this kind of fits. A bee bites into ...
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Re: Uncomfortable
This piece made me very upset, but still, I decided to press on. You are very brave for posting this, and it's clearly a sensitive piece. It was probably very ...
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Re: Taming the tea
Ah. I love this piece so much, especially the last stanza. "Carefully I bring another Sip to my lips My face brightens. The dragons didn't bite me this time, Instead ...
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Re: New queen
Hi! I thought this was a really interesting piece. I know this is a trope, but most princesses seem to dream of the day they find their princes and are ...
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Re: Oblivion
I really, really liked this piece. It gives the piece a sense of anxiety, which can be like oblivion at times. Or possibly, could it be about the 'fake' people ...
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Re: Dead or Alive Part 1
Oh, my God. Something about this reminds me of an apocalyptic (or possibly apocalyptic) story that's James Patterson-esque. I really enjoy this concept; I mean, I've never really thought of ...
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Re: Leviathan.
Woah. Okay, there's a lot to unpack here. Let me start with saying that while this story doesn't have a lot of descriptors in it, it really nicely paints the ...
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Re: Apprentice to master - Chapter one
This is a great concept, but I did see some functional/grammatical errors, if I may point them out: 1. “You Bitch!” Came a loud voice from the bathroom. “Give it ...
Nov 4, 2020
