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Re: Two Sided
Your poems seem to describe my life, so I really like you as a writer. I am definitely a fan. "You say you know me, But we both wonder, “Do ...
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Re: Hurt
This poem particularly moved me, because it's how I feel about myself. There was a particular time in my life where i was compared to a robot and that really ...
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Re: The Wind
This a beautifully worded poem and normally, when I read poems, as long as this one, I get put off by the inability to keep the flow going, however I ...
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Re: Reality's Melodrama
"Warm blood in my veins started to rush, as our sparkled mystical sights collided and crashed, deafening silence, tremble of heartbeats, thoughts of my mind I will always repeat." I ...
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Re: Fragments of Feelings
I really enjoyed this poem. It creates this feeling as if touching the thorn of a rose or poisonous ivy. I really enjoyed isualising the images you painted in my ...
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Re: He Never Left
This poem creates a very vivid picture of pain and letting go of someone, when you're not ready yet. MY FAVORITE STANZAS, "What are you to do in the dark ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Jealous Leaves of Ivy
I like this poem. It's short and sweet. I particularly like the first stanza. The title captivated me from the beginning. I love the line, "You broke back this mountain ...
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Re: One in a Million
This poem is AMAZING. the language, the structure, the way in which you repeated the one in a million. You kept me captivated from the title till the last full ...
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Re: Mixed Emotions
This whole poem is my whole life story in terms of love. Which as you can tell is unlucky. I guess that's why I liked the poem, because it can ...
Jun 26, 2013 -
Re: Beauty is a Beast, Beast a Beauty
This poem is definitely about someone, it's really easy to tell that. "Beauty is a beast. Her perfectly manicured nails will rip you to shreds. Her white chicklet-square teeth will ...
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Re: Release
I really like this poem and I'm assuming it's about a self harmer. Though I am not one myself, I have a friend who is and she always tells me, ...
Jun 26, 2013 -
Re: Her
I really, really like this poem. It reminds me of a song I was listening to while reviewing this piece of text. It's called Youth by Daughter. It reminds me ...
Jun 26, 2013 -
Re: Teenage Love
I LOVE this poem, a lot. Its short and sweet. In fact i think i would like it less if it was any longer because though it's only three stanzas ...
Jun 23, 2013 -
Re: A Promise, of Sort
I really like this poem. It really lets my mind wonder into different settings and that's exactly what i look for when i read something. I want to travel and ...
Jun 23, 2013 -
Re: Look past Her
I really enjoyed this poem. The title already captivated me and the poem seemed to keep me grasped. So well done. This poem has so much emotion, i think it'd ...
Jun 23, 2013
