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This poem is really simplistic, however this isn't a bad thing. Some great things come in small packages. Two adjectives to describe this: SHORT and SWEET. For some reason I ...

First off! The structure of your poem is amazing, really enhances the feeling of everything going downhill, falling apart. I love it. Here is it basically. You're a complete stranger ...

First off, I'll start with the negatives as there are WAY more positives to highlight afterwords. If this is a poem, i kindly suggest you do it the format of ...

This poem caught my attention right off the bat. WHY? the title. "I wish you knew*DOT" The dot really got me to look at it, it's really short as if ...

I really like this poem; I think it has loads of potential. The repetition used is really effective as the feeling of the entire poem really sticks to the reader. ...

Hi Bethany Marie Wright!! I really love this poem, it literally brought tears to my eyes. It seems that you have been through quite a bit, don't take this wrongly ...

There are two ways you can think of "her" in this poem; you can either love "her" or hate "her" and that's what I love about this poem. It is ...

This poem is tragically beautiful. The way in which you have written it makes me want to cry a whole rive. It is a very sad poem and you've achieved ...

First of all, I was captivated by the title and I am a real sucker for romance. Though this is a stereotypical love poem, you've performed very well in terms ...

This poem is thoroughly amazing. It has something I like to call the 3 S': SHORT, SWEET and SIMPLE. The poem is slightly ambiguous which means the reader can have ...

This short story is amazing. The language is really emotive and it basically put me in tears. That is a real talent, cm57105, if you can do that someone just ...

I really LOVE this poem. The emotion inside it just fills me with familiarity because its exactly how I feel everyday. These types of love are the most complicated ones, ...

This poem is short and sweet and that's what I like about it. The concept is entirely right, innocence is a like butterfly kisses. The title drew me in towards ...

this poem is great and good things come in little packages. I really like the fact that it is not really long, so it kept my interest. The words are ...

This poem is short and sour, but in the best ways. Rather than saying short and sweet, this poem develops the character of a particular person in five lines and ...