This poem caught my attention right off the bat. WHY? the title.
"I wish you knew*DOT"
The dot really got me to look at it, it's really short as if it's holding a secret. As if there's a sense of unsaid words. I really like that in poems. The title is the thoughts, the secrets you never said, unlocked and woven between the stanzas and verses. I find it beautifully tragic this poem. Sharing something more with someone only to realize suddenly, that all good things come to an end.
"'till you met her and forgot me"
This line really brings tears to my eyes.
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