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Heyy. Firstly thanks a lot for appreciating my article and taking it seriously. Your answer to it was infact like a continuation to my thread of beliefs so I could ...

Hey mammad, First of all I must tell you that I really liked your poem. You've presented it really well. It is free of any typing, grammatical flaws and hence ...

Hey Morrigan, Firstly, I would like to congratulate you for being in the Literary Spotlight. This poem truly deserves to be there by all means! Your poem has a feel ...

Hey EnderFlash, First of all, congratulations on getting featured in the Literary Spotlight. And I must say, you deserve to sustain the position. It is a really new, fresh and ...

Hey disillusioned, Even I am not a science person. So when this started, I was about to change the page, just as you were going to change the channel. But ...

Hey ThePhoenix, I had reviewed the first chapter and it had instantly become dear to me. I was really waiting for the next chapter! So I was excited when I ...

Hey Lylas, Firstly, I feel that you should shift i from the poetry section to the short story section because that it a tad more suitable. I can't really point ...

Hey Chaser, This one took my heart away. It started off as a well-written poem but the way you ended it with this line "But then I look to you, ...

Hey Deanie, Firstly, my wishes are with your aunt. This poem is really touching and inspiring. I just wish you could have put that note in the end because after ...

Hey dittoslash, Firstly I would like to mention that the repetitive use of the word *wrenched* and *ordinary* makes the start of your story really un-attractive. The first paragraph to ...

Hey SunshineGriffith, This piece is well-written in terms of grammar, vocabulary and phrasing but still it lacks the interest that would hold a reader's attention to read forward. This is ...

Hey Pretzelsing, I really enjoyed reading this story. You've written it to near perfection. Just a few typos: "Bug-eyed, the boy was barely more than a toddler; who had just ...

Hey GreenLight24, Your poem has a simple and subtle theme of getting into college and trying to explain what college means to you. It was not hard hit on the ...

Hey myjaspercat, Even though you mentioned that you think love poetry is cliched, still, yours is far from the mediocre. You managed to write love poetry that does not sound ...

Hey Firepower13, You've written a really nice poem. It couldn't strike really well in the first read but when I read it for the second time, the picture and idea ...