Before you start reading, I have one thing to say, well, two things. Ahem. THIS— Wait, I should probably put this in bold to emphasise my point.
Alright, I think I got it. THIS IS THE WORST THING I HAVE EVER WRITTEN. In my opinion anyways. Seriously, I COMPLETELY FORGOT TO ADD THE MOST AMAZING THING EVER! That's why I'm putting it in the next chapter. :D
But yeah, this chapter is pretty bad. So my advice: STOP READING NOW AS TO NOT TO HURT YOUR BRAIN SINCE IT IS THAT BAD!
But if you want to read, well, don't say I didn't warn you. :D
Also, the second thing is. Do you see what changed in the title?
You: Besides the fact it says Chapter Two?
Me: Yes...
Chapter Two
July 10th
8:10 AM
General Perspective
“The results are abnormal. No. Beyond abnormal. No child should be able to recover from a stab in the heart like he did. The recovery was so quick too.” The doctor was more confused than he had ever been. The stab wound was clearly on the left side of the child’s chest. “Wait a minute. X-ray his chest.” The doctor rushed over to the child lying down on the bed.
“Wait, why?” asked the nurse as she ran over to where the doctor was standing.
“Because. What if his heart isn’t on the left?” The doctor began lift the boy onto a stretcher.
“Careful. You might hurt him.”
“Oh relax, if a stab through the heart won’t kill him then this won’t either. That is if he was stabbed through the heart at all.” He started pushing the stretcher outside into the corridor and heading left towards the elevator.
“Wait!” The nurse chased after the doctor. But the elevator doors closed before she could get in. Which was probably a good thing.
Adam
The light of the elevator hurt his eyes. He was about to raise his arm to cover his eyes before he realized the light was directly above him when it wasn’t before.
Wait… What’s happening?
He sat up and tried to look around before his mouth was covered by someone’s hand and was pushed back down onto the stretcher.
“Don’t talk. There’s something odd about you. And you’re going to stay perfectly still while I try to figure out what.”
Ha-ha. Who does this guy think he is? Just die.
Underneath the hand that was covering Adam’s mouth, he smiled. But the smile would’ve shown evil intentions if the doctor could see it. But he would’ve had no chance to see it. Especially since the action was already done.
The sword flew out from under the ground and sliced the doctor in half, sticking to the roof by cutting through a portion of it.
Adam sat up again, this time, with no interruptions. That’s when he realized what he did.
“Oh no. Well. There’s the bloodlust.” He sighed. “I knew coming back here was a bad idea.” He was about to grab his sword when he felt a strong energy.
This is… the Archangel. He found me. Well I guess he found me yesterday but whatever.
He pulled his sword down from the ceiling and pointed it straight at where the energy was the strongest.
The north. Wait a minute. This energy isn’t strong enough to be an Archangel’s, but definitely stronger than a human’s. This doesn’t make sense.
He lowered his sword, curious as to whom it was. Two seconds passed, three, four… and the elevator exploded from the impact of the attack made from the energy source, but it didn’t stop there. A sword slashed at his body, cutting through his abdomen. Blood was coughed out from his mouth as well as spilling out from the area where he was cut.
He then heard a voice. “Die.”
Adam laughed at this comment and raised his hands so he could clap. “Clever, I guess I forgot that an Archangel’s sword also has an energy wavelength. But there’s just one thing you can’t seem to get right.” He turned around so he could face the Archangel while also picking up his sword. “My heart… is on the right.”
Michael’s Perspective
The world was spinning as his mind tried to figure out why he couldn’t just aim for the Demon’s right side. But his thoughts were interrupted by a scream from outside.
Wait, outside? That means.
He looked up to see a woman falling and crashing down onto the grass below.
“Lucky we’re not in a skyscraper, eh? Otherwise you would’ve just caused a death. Though she probably has some injuries. May or may not be severe.” Adam was on his legs and looking over the edge to see the woman lying down on the grass. “So, you going to—” With a slash of his sword, he forced the Demon down to the grass, but he fell farther than that. As soon as Adam made contact with the ground, his body in a flat position, he created a massive crater that went three metres deep. But the Archangel didn’t stop attacking. He threw his sword down at the Demon piercing his abdomen.
He could see the Demon struggling to get up. But he wouldn’t get up. Ever. And he would make sure of that.
Sword Detonation.
And with that single thought. The sword and the insides of the demon child exploded causing masses of blood everywhere.
Adam’s Perspective
The pain was unbearable. He felt every blood vessel and every organ explode, but especially the pain of his body being ripped in two as he flew up into the air and landed on concrete. His vision started blurring. His breathing slowed down and he stopped screaming.
This. Is bad.
He could sense the Archangel’s presence. He could also feel the tip of a sword pressing against his throat.
In a soft voice but with a hint of craziness behind it, Michael spoke. “Say hello to your relatives for me.” And with that, he drove his sword through Adam’s throat.
He never knew how warm fire really was. He never saw how dark the light could be. He never thought darkness could be brighter than light. And in that moment, Adam realized something. Dying beat anything and everything. It was such a relief. No more pressure of living. No more stupid Archangel’s. He wondered what the afterlife was like. But no matter what it was like, he didn’t care, even if it was just floating around forever.
Then the fire got hotter. The light got brighter. The darkness dissipated. And then, he was standing in a room. And he could finally see. He could see a fire in a fireplace. And the warmth was nice. He could also see a woman in a long black dress. Her long black hair stretched all the way down to her waist. Her back was facing him so he couldn’t see her face, until she turned around. She was beautiful, no doubt about that. She looked to be around twenty something years old.
The woman sighed. “Well there’s the last of the Demon’s. I thought I created you guys to be stronger than that.” She took a couple of steps towards Adam until she was right in front of him. She seemed to examine him for a second before patting him on the head. “Well I suppose you are still a child. Sad you couldn’t live to eighteen. Oh well, go ahead. Run along.” She turned around sit down on a sofa.
Adam was dumbfounded as he tried to piece together the clues she had given, eventually coming to a conclusion. “So if I’ve heard everything correctly. You created the Demon race. Which makes you, Darkness.”
She smiled. “Well aren’t you a bright… demon child. I think that’s the correct term for you. But yes. I am. So I guess that makes me your mother. In a way.”
Adam tried to tap his head but having nothing to lean on, he tapped his cheek several times instead. This was a habit that developed over the years for whenever he was thinking. “Huh. I always imagined that you had no form. Or was a guy if you did. Wait. That’s sexist isn’t it? Damn it.”
She laughed. It was a short laugh. About one second long. But it was a laugh. “I’m kind of glad you’re not like the other Demon’s. Bloodthirsty and… well just not very fun to be around.”
“But they’re still here? Like, well, whatever this place is, I don’t know. Hell? But are the Demons here?”
“Oh, you’re confused why you can’t feel their wavelengths? Yeah, I got rid of all the energy wavelengths because it was annoying. But no, the rest of the Demons don’t exist anymore. I got rid of them.” She picked up a book that had appeared on the table beside her and began reading it. The title read ‘To Kill a Mockingbird’.
The news shocked him. Not that he planned on interacting with any of them. But he felt disappointed. No, he felt. Sad. Even though he was completely different to them, they were still his kind. No matter how tiny the connection between him and the other Demons were, it was still a connection. He took a deep breath.
It’s fine. You wouldn’t have fit in anyways.
“So, does that mean you’re getting rid of me?” His eyes showed a hint of fear in them.
“Hm. Possibly.” She put down her book. “Actually. I’m going to need you.” Her red eyes met his brown ones, which made him slightly uncomfortable and took a step backwards. “It’s not hard. I just need you to kill the… angel.”
He looked at her confusingly. “Why the hesitation?”
Darkness giggled. “Well you see, he’s not really an Archangel anymore. He has too much… wrath and bloodlust now. Which isn’t a good thing for Angels.”
“So, he’s a Fallen Angel?”
“Hm, no not quite. A Fallen Angel is an Angel that has sided with evil. But this one is more of just… wants to kill. The bloodlust has a pretty strong effect on him ever since he killed you. Which is nice I guess. More death is definitely nice.” More giggles left her lips.
“Uh huh.” He nodded his head unconsciously. “So how do you think I’m going to kill him?”
She smiled. Not a heartwarming smile, but an evil one. And Adam could clearly see that.
“So, what’s the plan?” Adam asked, still uncomfortable.
She stepped closer. "Hellfire. And a dash of my dangerous minions."
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*knocks the door, no response, breaks the door, comes in!*
Ha! Hello! Did you miss me? Told you that I’ll be here! Okay, so, first off, SOMETHING’S CHANGED IN THE TITLE!! Three dots! Seriously? >_>
I demanded and hoped for more changes. Like, what about, “Demons aren’t devil?”
-Heh, you idiot person!
-Shut up! I’m doing something important here! We can talk later!
*disconnects myself from the brain*
Now, new thing about this chapter- perspectives! Yeah! Oh, here’s a thing, little dumb suggestion! You could (when you’re saying Adam’s perspective or Michael’s) make the stuff come out from them. Like, instead of saying, “The light of the elevator hurt his eyes” you could use “The light of the elevator is hurting my eyes.” :3 Um.. if you can understand my point. Oh, and, you probably forgot to write “Adam’s perspective” after the general perspective part. And, you could use colons ( : ) probably after the headlines? Yeah, they’re highlighted already but you know, um.. how about you call it beautification?!!
Now, oh, wait a second, you think this chapter is the worst thing you’ve ever written? Lord! Truly mental or no, tental! Because, I enjoyed reading it from the very first! And, I surely want to see the next chapter very soon! Otherwise, I’m filing a case!
Now, the characters. I’m not liking that angel uncle or whatever. I mean, not the way you’ve developed the character but just the person. He stinks! And, how about you use some specific year or years? That should be awesome because by that you can have a more definite and clear image!!
So, that’s almost it! Post the next chapter! Like, do it, seriously! It’s been 4 months already!
So, I better not continue. My reviews stink, I know, you don’t have to tell me that. D:
Have a great day! Um.. next chapter?
~ Nire!
Next chapter, please?
Woo boy. Today was so busy. So I'm sneaking onto YWS when I shouldn't be
Impressive... However, you're unfortunate enough to end up with me as a reviewer, so y'better prepare your prayers and maybe even a box o' tissues~~~ 
Just a warning beforehand: as my personality dictates, I can be insensitive, brutally honest, and even harsh in my criticisms. Though, hopefully it's all justified, and hopefully you won't be offended, but rather helped by my ridiculously blunt comments. Just sayin'. Y'know.
). So grab your popcorn and I'll start pointin' them out to you, along with randomly spewing our barrages of possible opportunities for improvements.
). I think, instead of the doctor suddenly remember that they need to do an x-ray (how did he even get his medical license, if he's really that forgetful? It's unrealistic.), the scene should instead depict the doctor and nurse puzzling over an x-ray diagram. Here, the two will then realize that his heart is on the wrong side, and the doctor will say something like "Perhaps the machine malfunctioned when digitizing these images. Have them take another set of pictures." And then, he'll wheel Adam away and the next scene unfolds. The dialogue between the doctor and the nurse was also quite... nonsensical, for lack of a better word. Like I've pointed out before, x-rays are important, and pictures will be taken as soon as possible. Nurses should know that, and won't object to it. And even if Adam wasn't stabbed through the heart, he was stabbed through something. Bodies are made of flesh 'n' nerves, after all! The doctor should be more considerate of him. Even if he turns out to be... more malevolent than he initially appeared, he wouldn't drop his act in front of the nurse, who seemed to actually care about tending to the patient.
It's not a bad thing, no. All writers should rightfully struggle with their characters (if they don't, they've probably either given too little thought, or don't care at all). If you need any specific help, feel free to PM me. Character dev is one of the subjects I actually enjoy talking about, and I'm willing to surrender any morsels of wisdom I may have accumulated over the years... goodness I sound old. (/ OAO)/ Also, if the doctor's hand was covering his mouth, the doctor should be able to feel Adam smiling. Try rewriting the scene so that the doctor realizes something is wrong, frowns and tries to move, and is then immediately cut in two (GLORIOUS! 
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*sobs in a corner*
Aherm. Anyways, to that review that I promised you! And, you've managed to gather three loyal readers already!
As stated by your warning before the chapter, this chappie really needs some help (are you hurt yet?
Firstly, your doctor sounds really... undoctor-ish. Normally, when an 11-year-old boy is stabbed through his chest in the middle of the night by his own grandfather, you'd clearly expect the doctors to get an x-ray as soon as possible to diagnose any internal damages. They're not going to wait for any reason, they'll scan him immediately, cut 'im open if need be, and do all they can to fix the problem within the hour. Remember: this is a real-life society you're trying to model here, along with a serious situation. There's no excuse any doctors can possibly give to postpone something as important as fixing a stab through the heart (even though he wasn't really stabbed through the heart, but they don't know that
Secondly, I do agree with your wall post. And withdraw my statement from my previous review on the first chappie. Adam's personality is.... is.... er.... is.... >____________> er....... I give up. You have a lot of character development to do
Here, I will pause in my mutilation of your story to note: your incorporation of violence/blood is pretty dang gorgeous, if I do say so m'self. Though, the style in which you execute it is somewhat... bland, and makes it seem as if you are only being gorey for the sake of being gorey. This is a problem I also struggle with, and I find it helpful to just read a bunch of fighting books to see how other writers are doing.
Now, moving onto the actual plot itself. Even though this is the second chapter, you've already got a veeery interesting plot going on. There are a few Chekhov's guns lying about, some hints at progress, etc. etc. Now, I hope you already have a developed story line... right? XD Ahem, but don't worry about that now, I s'ppose. You can always go back and change things... However, in this chapter alone, I must say I really like how you set up this world, and the way you envisioned Darkness.
Another thing about her, though, is that she was reading the book, "To Kill a Mockingbird." It's fine and all to reference fine literature, but I hope you have a specific purpose for choosing that book alone. To kill a mockingbird, as dictated by the story, is to commit a grave sin. The story itself is about courage, overcoming, knowing a battle is lost but fighting it anyways for a worthy cause, the darkness in people's hearts and the light that can occasionally be ignited to do the right, etc. If you want to include details like that in there, you have to have a specific reason for doing so, and it has to be obvious. Just saying. If you already have that under control, then ignore this paragraph :>
In other news, let us take a closer look at the story overall! I've noticed that you need, frankly, a LOT of help on character development, setting description, and last but most DEFINITELY not least, your writing style/writer's voice.
The first part, the character dev, you are already aware of, and that's good. Keep working on that. If you'd like, I can write a list of activities for you to do to know your characters better and develop them more.
As for the settings description, you include too little on the background things. A lot of people, upon learning of this, will just include a huge chunk of description at the beginning of the chapter. That's not efficient-- it wastes time, and it bores the readers. They probably won't even bothering remembering half of what you wrote. Instead, try incorporating little bits here and there in your writing to make your world seem more realistic and three-dimensional. I'm currently helping another person with this problem, actually. If you'd like, I can send you a copy of the paper I'm writing for her (once I'm done writing it, of course Q_Q).
Well, since you're still quite young, I suppose it's only expected for you to not have a developed style of writing. It's something I'm working on as well. Basically, what's unique about your style of writing? Do you tend to have fancy word structures? Do you prefer to describe things abstractly, or just straight out write about it? What kind of syntax do you favor? What kind of mechanisms do you incorporate in your writing? Things like that.
All three of these can be improved upon with excessive amounts of reading. Reading heals the writer's soul :>
There are also a bunch of grammatical errors here and there... you can also manipulate sentence structure in a more efficient manner... But other than that, there doesn't seem to be any major mistakes. So... congratulations on finally updating your story! XD Hopefully, you found this review to be helpful and not too harsh. I'll be looking forward to the next installment~~~~~ *pressure pressure pressure* >:)
Happy writing~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!
*Reads first couple of lines*
*Closes laptop*
No. No. I can't read more. I CAN'T!
...How did I ever get stuck with you as a host?
LEAVE ME ALONE!
...I can't. I'm your brain.
I HATE YOU!
I hate you too.
ThePhoenix has rage quit. Kinda.
You poor, poor child. You're arguing with your own brain? 90% of mine is manifested by a giant, creepy smiley face that always forces me to blank out and go dumb during the most crucial moments. Other than that, I'm tormented by more than 2570 souls, a lot of them trying to take over as the main soul. And my characters are constantly bullying me. -_-
Anyways, please do finish reading my review sometimes. After all, you're not going to get anywhere with just complaining about how you don't like your stories, yes? :F I bet I spent more time writing it than you'll spend time reading it~~~~~
I'm really not sure how this person works. HER PERSONALITY JUST CHANGED!
Omg. So surprised. Ahhhhhh.
Come on. Are you really not interested in deciphering someone's personality.
No because 90% of the time I'm arguing with you and the other 9% of my time is spent procrastinating.
...What about the other 1%?
Well, 0.9% of the time generally going through existential crisis.
I thought it was more than that... And what about that 0.1%
Oh that? Oh, well... 0.1% of the time is when I actually work. No wait. No. 0.09% of the time is listening to music.
...Don't you listen to music more than that?
Yeah kinda.
Well I think I should leave and contemplate my life.
ThePhoenix has signed out.
Pfffft... you'll never be able to understand how I work
Sometimes my other souls take over, and they do whatever. I don't have a set personality. And as far as you know, the person on YWS isn't the same person that is me. I might just be acting a certain way~~~ >: )
Pffft if you're going through existential crisis, do more things! >:-\ Like climb a mountain. I've started to do that everyday, and it really helps. Especially the view at night. Truly inspiring. Jolly good, wot.
Also, please do get around to reading me review sometimes. If you need any more help/just need to blurt things out to another living creature, feel free to PM me~
...I did climb a mountain.
Correction. Your parents climbed it. You were pretty much asleep the entire time.
HOW DO YOU EVEN REMEMBER THAT?
Shhh, I'm a genius. Don't worry about it.
...
So are you going to read her review anytime soon?
...Maybe.
You're not going to are you?
I'M TOO SCARED! I know she's only trying to help (I hope) but it's really hard...
Yes because it is soooo hard to READ! OK? READING IS NOT HARD! YOU HAVE DONE HARDER THINGS! I think. WHAT ABOUT ROCK CLIMBING?
BUT ROCK CLIMBING IS PHYSICAL! READING IS MENTAL! AND WE ALL KNOW THAT MENTAL STUFF IS NOT MY FORTE!
Surprisingly since YOU ARE MENTAL! YOU ARE TALKING TO YOUR BRAIN!
...Shut up.
Mental? Mental? You wanna hear about being mental? Huh? Huh? I can keep you up ALL night telling you about my mentality. And it ain't gon' be pretty. >:C Well, just read my review already. What do you think I'd say, that the story is terrible and you should just spend your entire life in a hole? Of course not.
I talk to literally everything. You have nothing on me, friend.
Either ways, if you really want to improve your writing so you won't ever have to put up a warning in front of your chappies again? You need to take a bit of a hit sometimes. I'm not harsh just to be rude, y'know.
I remember when you used to talk to everything.
Oh yeah... Why did i stop?
Because I convinced you to...
...Oh. Well you didn't really help since I'm talking to you now...
Too many ellipses...
And you're also the reason for my OCD when it comes to grammar.
Pffft ellipses are cool~~~ :3 Feel free to find me on the chat bar right now, if you want to continue this conversation. We really shouldn't spam the review section of your literary work......... ELLIPSES! ...................................................................... They are the new tildes now~~~~~~
NO! ELLIPSES ARE MY THING!
...I really don't understand you.
Heh, you never will.
Also, be proud. HE HAS READ YOUR REVIEW. Well, part of it anyway. He kinda just skimmed through it.
Meh, I read enough to know what I need to improve on.
...Everything?
Yep.
Thought so.
Well, if you'll excuse me. I shall now furiously lip-sync to My Chemical Romance and Fall Out Boy.
...Do you really have nothing better to do?
HOW DARE YOU! DO NOT DISS FOB AND MCR!
...I wasn't.
YOU WERE IMPLYING THAT THEY WEREN'T WORTH MY TIME!
...Nothing is.
Maybe you're the cause for my low self-esteem as well...
Probably.
Well I'm going to get going now.
ThePhoenix has signed out.
Hey ThePhoenix,
I understand why you feel it is the worst chapter. Because the expectations were high. But you know what, this society is made to help you perfect your stories! And just in case, your story is perfect. I mean the succeeding plot is fine but just a little more effort in writing. We're all here to help you with that! So let's start with the review! 
)
I had reviewed the first chapter and it had instantly become dear to me. I was really waiting for the next chapter! So I was excited when I opened the link but then I read the introductory lines and got pissed off. I really like your story, okay! So you have no write to be cynical about it!
1. Firstly I would say that the way you're writing the events, putting the names of the characters before their narrative; that's confusing. See, if you really want to write the story like that, you should do it in first-person. The characters should speak their part otherwise there is no use listing out their names every second time! You are doing the story from a third-person perspective so you could just do it like that..
2. "He was about to raise his arm to cover his eyes before he realized the light was directly above him when it wasn’t before."
(*when it wasn't before* seems wrong somehow)
3. "Underneath the hand that was covering Adam’s mouth, he smiled. But the smile would’ve shown evil intentions if the doctor could see it. But he would’ve had no chance to see it."
(The usage of *But* repeatedly makes it clumsy)
4. " he didn’t care, even if it was just floating around forever."
(I think it should be even if *he* was just...)
5. "I thought I created you guys to be stronger than that.”
(She is supposed to be firm and evil. Replace the word *guys* with an impactful word like *species*. With your caliber, I'm sure you can think of better alternatives. Also, you've introduced her to be a lot casual and chilled out. But I think if you work on this character a little bit more, it could do wonders for your plot!)
6. "She laughed. It was a short laugh. About one second long. But it was a laugh."
(This line sounds funny. It doesn't suit there. I'm sure you can come up with better options which I'm unable to think of
7. Small mistake. The word is *anyway* and not *anyways*
So the conclusion is that you just have to do your character sketches well and work on making the scenes dreading and impactful. And I"m sure you can do that, that is if you stop underestimating yourself! Just grasp what all the reviewers say and edit this chapter well before moving on. I want to read more and more of this! Really enjoying it
Happy writing
-Ishita Dutt
I came back from my hiatus for a short period because I realised I didn't read your review yet. And I didn't know what caliber meant until I searched it up.
I said "came" because by the time you read this it will be... well, in the past.
Also, you should know. I have VERY low self-esteem. Hence the... warning at the beginning.
I understand that you don't believe in yourself. But you must believe in your story! Or else you won't o justice to it
But the story is kind of... written... by me...
I think that was one too many ellipses.
Just one? Maybe not... two?
...Aren't I supposed to be the logical one here?
Maybe we switched roles...
... No. No we didn't.
Well, can't blame for believing.
Yes I can.
...I'm leaving.
YOU DID IT! YOU FINALLY DID IT!
Hey, Will here.
Firstly, YOU DID IT! @CorruptedRoseJen
You did the second chapter! Congrats. I don't like the warning at the start, but more about that later. This chapter was fabulous. I loved it. It flows really well, the character development is more than great, and it feels right. It also makes me want more! I liked the idea of how darkness is a real person, and when you die you go to hell or something (that part you didn't really clear, so that's something you can work on.)
So, criticisms. Firstly, I would like to say, Adam is waaaaay too chill. I know that's how the character is supposed to be, but still. Even when he;s about to die, he's just like 'Ok.' Pack some emotion into it! I know you can do it...
Secondly, the end bit.
In this part, Adam asks the same question (more or less) twice! So he's like, "How am I going to kill him? So, what's the plan." In my opinion, it disrupts the flow of the text.
Thirdly - well, this isn't a criticism, but more of an idea. After the doctor's examined him and stuff, and then he escaped, and then he died, and then the Archangel flew away - wouldn't there be any news? In reality, this would be like Breaking News! everywhere. In your next chapter (which we still will be bugging you about) please add something like this.
Finally, SCREW YOUR WARNING.
I've already said this but, HOW ABOUT NO. This = epic chapter. This = makes us want more.
Believe in yourself. You have this epic talent of writing, so use it! And don't be ashamed of it! IT'S WONDERFUL!
-willachilles
A NEW CHAPTER!!!! Oh boy oh boy oh-- *dies of excitement before I even got to read*
Er. Ehehehehe... I'll review when I get off mobile...
I just read your warning. Now I'm scared
But fear not! It can't be anywhere near how bad I am at writing...
Trust me, it's probably worse than yours.
Well... how old do you think I am?
... Older than me?
... Try again. A specific age.
...14?
I see.... Great, now I'm 14. I went from 16 --> 23 --> 17 --> 14.
...What do 14-year-olds do? Dang, I have to do research now...
... I'M SORRY!
No no no, dun worry about it
I don't have a set age to begin with, I'm just asking people to guess it based on my actions/speech/etc. Iz fun~~~~~ 
...It was kind of... a complete guess...
YOU USED TOO MANY ELLIPSES AGAIN!
ALRIGHT YOU DON'T HAVE TO SHOUT AT ME!