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Hi there! So, what can I say about this piece of creativity...? I wonder if in the first line you wanted to compare drama to cooking or cooking to drama. ...

Hi there it's Inspirus here to review the poem! To being with, I think 'Unstoppable' sounds more appropriate to the message in the poem. It also has an epic ring ...

Hi GoldFlame!! Here I am to try so futilely to return a favour. :) Getting into the reviewer's criticism, I really don't have any. Your imagery is just breath-taking, your ...

I'm sorry about your friend. The poem was really alive and beautifully sad, the vivid truth and genuineness of its inspiration stands out most. The fact that your feelings flowed ...

Hey there Adji! here to review Black Eyes once again. :) Let me start by saying, I liked the title of this chapter. Really ingenious. Secondly, I LOVED this part. ...

A dark but beautiful poem. I think there should be question marks here though Why do they haunt me Why not him How do I cope So why is there ...

Hi there Adji. So, i read chapter one, to some extent and finally tho whole of Chapter 2 Let me say, I have been impressed greatly. Your creativity and imagination ...

"No, Amber. I won't change my mind." Jake cut Amber off. A comma should precede the speaker's tag in this instance . The man Amber was about to attack was ...

Hmmm. ..I wonder if I should call this a narration. :) well, I'm a sucker for strange literal styles and im impressed with yours. There were some grammar mishaps, simply ...

First of all, you were rushing. There are tonnes of grammatical errors that you could have avoided. And that, is pretty natural. Proofreading is a draaaggg, believe me. But, its ...

wow, its such a lovely poem. I love the analogy, its such pure genius. My favourite line is: But, like books, we are taken from the shelves and opened, to ...

A lovely poem. A poem doesn't have to be artsy, or to have complex vocabulary. Sometimes all it takes is a genuine feeling and an emotion you want to share. ...

You clearly have a story to tell. The only problem is that your thoughts are not organised. One must really have an intent to understand what you were trying to ...

Hi again. Chapter three was great. It had its strengths and its weaknesses. I'll start with the weaknesses. First, your punctuation is wanting. You need to be keen on interrogative ...

Hey Biscuits, may i begin with complementing your creativity. As I was reading this, i got the impression that you had the scenes pictured out in your mind and that ...