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This was very coherent for something written in the wee hours of the morning!! I wake from a dead sleep to write something down all the time, so I completely ...

Hi, Soul! I'm Indie, and I'll be reviewing this poem you have here. This is sweet. Very sweet indeed! But the only thing that places it under a "poetry" category ...

Hayden! Hello. I've been meaning to review your work for a while, and now's my chance. This reminded me a lot of Hadassah's story towards the end of The Voice ...

Shoaib~ Have I mentioned before that I love your work? Your poetry just makes me kick back and sigh and settle in and thank God there’s hope for this world. ...

Hey, IceB!:) Here to review your lovely piece as promised. Since Kyla tackled the punctuation aspect of this poem, I’m just going to ignore that and work with you on ...

I liked this in the way that it reminded me of two mirrors that reflect each other. I found humor towards the end, with the interlude and whatnot. Wouldn't it ...

Hello, Dasia! Indie here with a review for you today. :) So I really like the content of this poem, definitely original because I haven’t read anything like this before. ...

Hi, Shino! Indie here with a review for this lovely poem you have here. :) First of all, you did a really good job with keeping with one overarching metaphor ...

Hi, david! Indie here with your review on this fine day. I’m just going to revise everything grammatically in your first paragraph, and that should give you an idea on ...

Hello~ Indie here to review your piece. First of all, I don't think this should go under the "Script" genre - it's more like flash fiction. And there is no ...

Hello, shoaib! Indie here with a review for you today. So about this narrative poem - I've written a few narrative poems lately on my own, so I have an ...

Hey there, Ben! Here to return the reviewing favor on your piece for dogs’ contest. Here we go! So I really like the theme of this poem - I haven’t ...

Hiya, Clock! Indie here again for a review for ya! So I like this little poem. It's definitely simple, and in a good way - it's the kind of simple ...

Hi, GeeLyria! Indie here for a review. So I really like this poem, especially the color symbolism you convey so nicely in this. I’ll focus on the content and message ...

Heya, Clock! I'm Indie, with your review for tonight. It's always nice to see someone my age into poetry!:) So this is a nice narrative poem you have here! I ...