What a beautiful and emotional poem, Ayden! I loved it!
This poem was so full of energy and personality. You had such great imagery and I could picture everything you described so well. I loved how you described all the ups and downs and inbetweens of finding yourself and becoming who you were always meant to be. You created an image in readers' minds of turning yourself inside out to show how you feel on the inside and how you are becoming that person on the outside, too. You had beautiful word choice that told your story perfectly. You didn't have any spelling, capitalization, grammar, or formatting errors. Your use of punctuation was very strategic to add emphasis and increase the impact on readers.
I'd really like to offer some improvements, but I can't think of anything that could improve this poem. You clearly took your time to edit it and it payed off!
This poem took me on quite an emotional trip. I felt your frustration, joy, anger, sadness, hope, pain, fear, contentedness, doubt, and satisfaction. Your words brought so many feelings to me! I absolutely love the way you write!
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Points: 7676
Reviews: 93
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