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Shoaib! It always brightens my day whenever I see you have recently posted a new poem of yours. Your line breaks are spectacular. Spot-on. This almost reads like spoken word, ...

Hi! Indie here for a brief line-by-line review after reading your poem aloud a few times to really catch the rhythm. for the dead unbound, but I think “the” in ...

Hello, Cow & Dreamy~ Here to review your collab piece! First of all, I’d like to commend you on your incredibly creative and original title. :) The main problem I ...

Hiya, Shady! Not-So-Secret Santa here again to review. :) So in the first paragraph, I noticed you started off again, similar to your prologue, with a lot of passive voice. ...

Hi, Shady! No need to fear, your Secret Santa has arrived to review! I’ll review it paragraph by paragraph, and then give you an overview of my thoughts at the ...

Hello! I remember reading this a while back, when you first published it, but never really got around to a review until now. My apologies for that. I don’t believe ...

Hello, Anna! Noticed this in the green room - your mention of this being a spoken word poem caught my eye. :) Onto the review! In my experience with reading ...

Hi there, Scarlett! Here to review this lovely piece for you. First of all, I didn’t read consider this poem as rambling to the point of flailing one’s arms about ...

Hey, Thereal! Indie here with a review on this little short you’ve written. :) Unravelling the last threads of our conversation, my friend and I stared blankly Great hook here, ...

Hi, Goo! Indie here with a review for ya. First thing - the blurb was a bit of a disappointment, as I would rather find out these things as I ...

This really is more of a rant than a literary piece, and belongs in a more appropriate setting like a blog. Now, don't get me wrong - it is completely ...

Well, um.. Unless I'm missing something here, I'm not really feeling the whole poetic aura flowing from this. Omitted text, maybe? Formatting error, possibly? Because according to the New Oxford ...

Ariana! Here, as requested. Sorry to be getting back to you so late. I like the rhyming in this okay. But it's really not consistent at all, which is something ...

Hey, Panth! Here with a review for you, as requested and in return. Let's begin. :) Something that caught my eye: Some rumbling shame Ohh. Oh. That is beautiful. Lovely ...

Hi, cat! (I love kitties, btw :3) Here to review, as requested! I’m going to tell you about the worst night of my life. Hmm. Not the best opening line. ...