Saying Goodbye

There is literally nothing here. I'm reviewing this to get a review day thing out of the way. My fingers are flying on the keys. So I don't know what a sestina is... Could you tell me? Anyway, it sounds really cool. I wish I could see the poem you actually wrote. It looks like it would be really awesome if it were here... now I'm just rambling. Thank you for letting me ramble. Feel free to get mad at me for rambling, lol. Love ya!!!

XOXO
-Rambles

Hi, paula.

I'm here to review for you!

Now, now, don't back down in humiliation from all those *glances at commenters* over there.

A sestina isn't really three sentences though, and it doesn't make sense. How does the title relate to the content? Still confused.

Since this doesn't have much rhyme or flow, I don't think this is a piece of poetry, and more rather a short story. A really short story.

If you want to actually put the content in, go click that "edit" button that should be somewhere on the right. There. Now you should go ahead and put your stuff in there. Then we can finally review your work.

I also particularly like the positive smiley at the end. Artistic !

I don't know if you can do magic or what so ever, or if this post can do magic, but I do know that it's invisible. I just can't seem to see it no matter how hard I squint.

Since you asked for a review, here it is by yours truly. I have no idea how this will help, or how your poem exists in this magic world of poetry, but I think it has a lot of good quality.

Now burst out happiness as you edit this... post..., and then I bet you'll love YWS more than you already do!

Don't waste those points! Keep writing!

I'm sure it's amazing. But it cant see it. Maybe try and re-post, maybe?

Hello hope this helps.

Well I am not sure wither you thought this was good enough for us to see because if it is the case then you were wrong.

Or maybe you could not post it or maybe you posted it and it was not posted properly or maybe this was supposed to be some other kind of post like on the lounge.

Anyway I would say go and get a mentor they would love to explain the howl thing out to you.

Well just trying to help.

~Jon~

I don't know if I..can see it. But, I'm sure its good!

Oopsie daisy!

where is the work?

Well, um.. Unless I'm missing something here, I'm not really feeling the whole poetic aura flowing from this. Omitted text, maybe? Formatting error, possibly? Because according to the New Oxford American Dictionary, a sestina is "a poem with six stanzas of six lines and a final triplet, all stanzas having the same six words at the line; ends in six different sequences that follow a fixed pattern, and with all six words appearing in the closing three-line envoi."

There's really just nothing to review. And the title doesn't relate with the text. So this is a bit awkward. . .

Short. To the point. I love it (especially the smiley face at the end)
-Sincerely your resident smart-ass