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Haha, I like it :) I like how you've described everything. Unfortunately, for me, this didn't have anything really to review because it was too short, but fortunately for you ...

My goodness! You've been hiding this? (jk I don't believe I know you... so "HI") I don't have anything other than that to say, I didn't catch any errors and ...

Hey there! I'll review you :) So... First off, I have to say that I really liked what you've done here because I can relate, and that's what you want ...

I myself am one of those people who never cries. (I actually don't think I can.) So this really spoke to me because when I was little, I would cry ...

OH, this is sooo cute! I love how you make reality seem trivial there. I would love to have a lil fish island of my own, do you have any ...

I.. uh.... I'm speechless? I don't think that's the way to describe it, 'tis more like I'm-trying-to-log-off-but-need-the-reviews type of thing, if you know what I'm saying? Okay. I like this. ...

Why, I'm impressed. Good job. I love how you described it and I read this like a true poem. It flowed and I understood it to a point where it ...

Was this somehow connected to Alice in Wonderland? It seemed like it, to me... but then again, I am insane! :) Okay, I liked it. I think you got the ...

Your rhyming was consistent and your point was quite clear, that's all great. But... your rhythm was kind of weird. I know, it's a short poem and it shouldn't be ...

Great job. I think that this is almost there, but it still needs some emotional depth. I've been saying that a lot lately, but it's true. Poetry isn't poetry without ...

Hey there! this poem needs a little more... how do I say it? ... Umph. It has the attitude, and you have the idea, but you don't have the right ...

Commas, commas! I agree with perdido. You don't need them all! :) Okay. I love what you're trying to do here, but I'm not sure you're getting it across. You ...

first of all, I have to ask: Is there a double meaning to this? Because it seems like it. If not for the title, and the little line at the ...

Hey! I can tell you worked very hard on this poem. It's well shaped and the idea is certainly developed. You put in good rhyming and had me in on ...

This is good... :) Hey! I'm Fixed, and I'm here to fix your poem! ;) *see what I did there? hhahaha ;)* Your imagery was good, your detailing, too... now ...