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Hey there, K4wa! What made me interested in this story was the description, and once I started reading the first line, I couldn't understand why you described it as such. ...

You know, after I was a few sentences in, all I was thinking of was "what." Then I was thinking of what to say about this. Because I HAD to ...

Hey there, Enflicted! I really liked how you used sleeping to reflect on the way this girl is unaware of what she's truly doing, because that's exactly how you are ...

Hey there, Savvy. c: So. Um. Wow. I was intrigued by this story because of the title and the fact that you said you worked on it with your dad ...

Yo, Adreamer! This is a very beautiful piece you have here. You've got some strong imagery and wonderful prose, and even though I'm usually not one to like romance pieces, ...

Hey, Kman! I saw that this was a supernatural piece so I thought I'd give it a shot. My first impression of this was that it was good, but there ...

Hey there, Jaspercat! These are wonderful observations you have here. My writing professor had us do the same thing, except with dialogue (so we literally walked around campus and listened ...

Hi there, Buggie. :D So the title of this work is what caught my attention. I mean, it's rare to see a story about public transportation, and I was a ...

Okay, so I'm glad I at least have a stronger sense of who Felix is now (and we can blame that on my bad eyes and poor searching skills), and ...

So I tried looking for the first chapter of this story to read through (mainly because your first line hooked me), but sadly, I couldn't find it. Mind linking it ...

Hey there, Songmorning! This is a pretty sweet epilogue you've got here. I'm vaguely familiar with Hell Girl, so I was kind of able to follow along. I won't pin ...

Hey, Mikayla. So you've got a cool idea going on here, and you've got a good grip on your setting and using it to help out your story, but there ...

This is a pretty cool take on things, Funky! I mean, I surely never thought of words that way, so it was interesting reading this and thinking it through. It's ...

Aw man. I feel so bad for Basira. D: This sadly reflects what's actually going on in the real world; a lot of women are betrayed, shamed, or (even worse) ...

Very nicely said! I think you've basically captured what most of us writers think about in pretty words. :P I honestly think one of the main reasons people write is ...