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Re: Magician X, Chapter 3: A Succubus at my School; part 1! The Most Beautiful Girl at my School!?
I'm sorry, but the whole story is so boring. I felt so bored by reading it.
Sep 20, 2013 -
Re: Shadowdale - Chapter 1
I like it. It's very well written. The story makes sense so far. It is still mysterious. I feel like everything you write is going the right way so smoothly. ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: Sounds of Oblivion- 1
I like it. I hope you will continue. It was really good choice to place your story to the area you know well. As the medical student I must say ...
Jul 13, 2013 -
Re: Growth
hello, It is quite deep. I like the idea you put there.
Jul 6, 2013 -
Re: Homeless
Oh, it is very nice. So simple and truthful. I like the way you think.
Jul 6, 2013 -
Re: 'Cause I Love You
Hello, I like the first 11 lines. I said myself that it is really interesting lyrics. But after that it all became boring and cheap. I'm not saying that it ...
Jul 5, 2013 -
Re: Regretville
It is really good. Keep writing. :)
May 17, 2013 -
Re: Cross My Heart
I think that the lyrics is not very original. One thing I like is the rhytm. It is really smooth and easy to sing.
May 17, 2013 -
Re: Captive Refrain
Really good.
Mar 10, 2013 -
Re: Trying To Save Her
Well done!
Mar 9, 2013 -
Re: Being numb is not that great...
wtf? thats simply great!
Mar 9, 2013 -
Re: I wasnt ready...
Quite good, ka67. :)
Mar 9, 2013 -
Re: Happy Ending Are A Lie
If you were 13 this poem would be great :P
Mar 9, 2013 -
Re: The Beginning of the End
Preety good :)
Mar 9, 2013 -
Re: Deaths Angel
Right it is not poetry. But it is really interesting piece of work. Keep on.
Mar 9, 2013