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Re: Conundrum
Hey there! Huda here,for a review. First of all, it was a fantastic piece of work. Both sad and hopeful at the same time. The imagery is good and the ...
Jul 15, 2015 -
Re: Oceans Can't Stem Loneliness II
Hey there, its Huda for a review. I love how you relate the seasons with a relationship and go much deeper and personify them for your emotions. The ideas is ...
Jun 25, 2015 -
Re: She's Brilliant
Hey there, its Huda for a review. Skimming through the poem, i found it perfect in terms of spellings and grammar. 'And preys on weaknesses an insecurities'. It should be ...
Jun 25, 2015 -
Re: Matthias
Hey, Huda here! Beautiful! It touched my heart and I love this. This is so good. In such short thing, you conveyed your feeling and made the heart feel it. ...
Dec 5, 2014 -
Re: Cliff Jumping in Maui
Hey! Huda here, for a review. I'm making bullet points so it'll be easy for me to write and you to read. 1) The word usage is really nice and ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: Trophy room
Hey! Huda here, for a review. Let's get to the actual review. The good points, the suggestions I would like to give and mistakes that I feel I should point ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: Monster
Hey! Huda here, for a review. The poem is good and I appreciate your writing skill. I notice that you are new to YWS so its really awesome that you ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: they sink
Hello Percybeth! Huda here, for a review. The poem is amazing and I love the basic idea behind it. I loved the way you personified your feelings with such skill. ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: In Silence...
Hello Vibe! Huda here, for a review. Firstly, I like the basic idea behind this and I appreciate this greatly. The poem is really good, I liked it. You know, ...
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: In My Arms, You'll Be Safe...
Hey! Huda here, The story is good and nicely written but there are errors that I would like to highlight: 1) You wrote: 'what if her baby girl died of ...
Jun 25, 2014 -
Re: I Want a Heart
Hey, Huda here OMG! I don't know what to say about this story. I'm literally awestruck. This story is more than an awesome one. I actually don't have words to ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: REDACTED
Hey, Huda here for a review. I'm making pointers so that it may be easy to understand. The story, in general, was good but there are a few errors I ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: Experiment 015
Hey, Huda here, Your story is good and I liked it a lot but there are a few things I would like to highlight: 1) You have too many breaks ...
Jun 22, 2014 -
Re: If Heaven Were Cold
Hey, Huda here. Oh my! The story is just awesome and it's really emotional. As the story proceeds, the reader gets more engulfed in it and sad emotions bulge inside. ...
Jun 22, 2014 -
Re: Fly Boy: Chapter Two
Hey, Huda here. The story is interesting and I liked it a lot. The starting, I must say is very inviting and it immediately interests the reader. The descriptions are ...
Jun 22, 2014
