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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Conundrum

    Hey there! Huda here,for a review. First of all, it was a fantastic piece of work. Both sad and hopeful at the same time. The imagery is good and the ...

    Jul 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Oceans Can't Stem Loneliness II

    Hey there, its Huda for a review. I love how you relate the seasons with a relationship and go much deeper and personify them for your emotions. The ideas is ...

    Jun 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: She's Brilliant

    Hey there, its Huda for a review. Skimming through the poem, i found it perfect in terms of spellings and grammar. 'And preys on weaknesses an insecurities'. It should be ...

    Jun 25, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Matthias

    Hey, Huda here! Beautiful! It touched my heart and I love this. This is so good. In such short thing, you conveyed your feeling and made the heart feel it. ...

    Dec 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Cliff Jumping in Maui

    Hey! Huda here, for a review. I'm making bullet points so it'll be easy for me to write and you to read. 1) The word usage is really nice and ...

    Nov 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, Horror Re: Trophy room

    Hey! Huda here, for a review. Let's get to the actual review. The good points, the suggestions I would like to give and mistakes that I feel I should point ...

    Nov 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Monster

    Hey! Huda here, for a review. The poem is good and I appreciate your writing skill. I notice that you are new to YWS so its really awesome that you ...

    Nov 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: they sink

    Hello Percybeth! Huda here, for a review. The poem is amazing and I love the basic idea behind it. I loved the way you personified your feelings with such skill. ...

    Nov 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: In Silence...

    Hello Vibe! Huda here, for a review. Firstly, I like the basic idea behind this and I appreciate this greatly. The poem is really good, I liked it. You know, ...

    Nov 16, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: In My Arms, You'll Be Safe...

    Hey! Huda here, The story is good and nicely written but there are errors that I would like to highlight: 1) You wrote: 'what if her baby girl died of ...

    Jun 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Science Fiction Re: I Want a Heart

    Hey, Huda here OMG! I don't know what to say about this story. I'm literally awestruck. This story is more than an awesome one. I actually don't have words to ...

    Jun 24, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: REDACTED

    Hey, Huda here for a review. I'm making pointers so that it may be easy to understand. The story, in general, was good but there are a few errors I ...

    Jun 24, 2014
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: Experiment 015

    Hey, Huda here, Your story is good and I liked it a lot but there are a few things I would like to highlight: 1) You have too many breaks ...

    Jun 22, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Literature Re: If Heaven Were Cold

    Hey, Huda here. Oh my! The story is just awesome and it's really emotional. As the story proceeds, the reader gets more engulfed in it and sad emotions bulge inside. ...

    Jun 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Science Fiction Re: Fly Boy: Chapter Two

    Hey, Huda here. The story is interesting and I liked it a lot. The starting, I must say is very inviting and it immediately interests the reader. The descriptions are ...

    Jun 22, 2014


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