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herbgirl

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The August Rain

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! I was first attracted to your poem because I love poems about rain. Author's tend to find lot's of inspiration in rain, and can ...

    Aug 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Last Meal

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! Hm. I like this poem. I thought it was interesting how you told the story of this woman's relationship so quickly, and so simply. ...

    Aug 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Call of the Wild

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! To start, this is a nice poem, I'm a fan. The way you describe the destruction of man from the view of a prestigious ...

    Aug 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Stranger

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So, this is a very nice poem, especially for such a new member! (Welcome to the site, by the way) I really like the ...

    Aug 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Feels

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So, I thought this was a very nice poem. You're very eloquent in pointing out how your feelings are just as valid as anyone ...

    Aug 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: What Even Bro

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! Well, clearly this poem holds a lot of meaning to you, which makes me a little afraid to review it. However, I still want ...

    Aug 9, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: All Life's Ever Been

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So, I really like this poem. Your voice is so easy to listen to, and I think you also describe a situation lots of ...

    Aug 8, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Friend

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! This is a simple, pleasant poem. I think the friendship you describe here is something most people can relate to at least at some ...

    Aug 7, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Flames

    Hello! herbgirl here to review! So, I liked your poem here. You had very good imagery, and I felt you packed a very strong punch in a very short piece ...

    Aug 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Time of Your Life

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So, this was a very nice, sort of stereotypical love poem. I'm not sure if this was what you were going for, but that's ...

    Aug 4, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Spiritual Re: Sinner

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So, this is a nice poem. The words you used to rhyme were very different than what one sees in the average poem, and ...

    Aug 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Young Survivor

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! Also, welcome to YWS! I hope your time here will be enjoyable, and I'm also glad that I get to be your first review! ...

    Aug 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Action / Adventure Re: Take off

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! I like your poem. I don't usually go off diving boards, I don't actually usually go to pools, so this poem had a sort ...

    Aug 1, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: greek toxin

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! I liked this poem, I think mainly because you communicated clearly a feeling which I, and many others, I believe, can share. Your comparison ...

    Aug 1, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ​The Madonna that never exists

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! This was an interesting poem. I liked the middle part of it the best, where you switch around the old "wolf in sheep's clothing" ...

    Jul 31, 2016


If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put the foundations under them.
— Henry David Thoreau, "Walden"