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herbgirl

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The August Rain

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! I was first attracted to your poem because I love poems about rain. Author's tend to find lot's of inspiration in rain, and can ...

    Aug 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Last Meal

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! Hm. I like this poem. I thought it was interesting how you told the story of this woman's relationship so quickly, and so simply. ...

    Aug 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Call of the Wild

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! To start, this is a nice poem, I'm a fan. The way you describe the destruction of man from the view of a prestigious ...

    Aug 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Stranger

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So, this is a very nice poem, especially for such a new member! (Welcome to the site, by the way) I really like the ...

    Aug 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Feels

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So, I thought this was a very nice poem. You're very eloquent in pointing out how your feelings are just as valid as anyone ...

    Aug 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: What Even Bro

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! Well, clearly this poem holds a lot of meaning to you, which makes me a little afraid to review it. However, I still want ...

    Aug 9, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: All Life's Ever Been

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So, I really like this poem. Your voice is so easy to listen to, and I think you also describe a situation lots of ...

    Aug 8, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Friend

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! This is a simple, pleasant poem. I think the friendship you describe here is something most people can relate to at least at some ...

    Aug 7, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Flames

    Hello! herbgirl here to review! So, I liked your poem here. You had very good imagery, and I felt you packed a very strong punch in a very short piece ...

    Aug 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Time of Your Life

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So, this was a very nice, sort of stereotypical love poem. I'm not sure if this was what you were going for, but that's ...

    Aug 4, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Spiritual Re: Sinner

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! So, this is a nice poem. The words you used to rhyme were very different than what one sees in the average poem, and ...

    Aug 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Young Survivor

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! Also, welcome to YWS! I hope your time here will be enjoyable, and I'm also glad that I get to be your first review! ...

    Aug 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Action / Adventure Re: Take off

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! I like your poem. I don't usually go off diving boards, I don't actually usually go to pools, so this poem had a sort ...

    Aug 1, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: greek toxin

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! I liked this poem, I think mainly because you communicated clearly a feeling which I, and many others, I believe, can share. Your comparison ...

    Aug 1, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ​The Madonna that never exists

    Hello! herbgirl here for a review! This was an interesting poem. I liked the middle part of it the best, where you switch around the old "wolf in sheep's clothing" ...

    Jul 31, 2016


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