herbgirl

I love the description of the sword! It sounds like quite the sight to behold. At first I was kind of confused about whether Julian was a boy or a ...

This is, like, one of the best short stories i've read! Your descriptions were incredible, I love how you made this seem like the girl was just a normal person. ...

I don't really understand this poem. When i first started reading, I was all like, ' the guy sees a girl he likes, and is frozen'. But then I kept ...

I have a couple of things to say about this little so-called "rant". Is it really a rant? It seems awful short to be a rant. But still, in the ...

I think this is hilarious! In a way.. I like how this poem tells a story, about how you are up (possibly cramming) and worrying about this great big test ...

Hey, you! Me likeys the first stanza. The part of that where you used 2nd person, like you were veiwing yourself, well, I thought that was cool. Okay 2nd stanza ...

I like the rhyme. I know that sounds weird, but I have read way too many poems that do not rhyme. So thank you. I like how you include all ...

This poem is coolness. I like how every couple lines you interluded with the word 'woman'. The message in this poem is plain as day. It says, "GIRLS ARE AWESOME!", ...

Awesomeness! I loved this poem! It reminded me of this book I read. It was kind of like Robin Hood. Anyway, I love how you used rhyme throughout the whole ...

Hey, It's herby, here for a reveiw. The beginning of this poem sort of drew me in. I was interested. I think it was expertly worded, too. But about half ...

I am slightly confused. Did she destroy her brown eye? Is it still working? Now, on to what I think is awesome. I love how you describe her physical pain, ...

I really like how your poem actually rhymes. I have read so many poems that don't rhyme at all, and that is a factor I appreciate in poetry ( even ...

Okay, so at first I thought that this was a story about an actual lost love of the author, but as I read on, I realised that This was a ...

the ending and the beginning of this poem are magnificent! The opening sentence automatically made me think, 'he got a tatoo'. But as I read further on, I realised, 'oh, ...

This poem is ok. I have a question, though. You say you cant stay in the walls forever. then you say they might fall. Do you want to escape the ...