helenelizabethclarke

Hey thanks for the reviews. Selene- her secret is her body. Nobody's ever seen it before, it's like she's giving it away... Emma- I got my inspiration from a decision ...

Hey thanks! Categorised is spelt with an s here in the UK. :D

I edited this a little using some of your marvellous and helpful ideas! Have i changed it for the better or worse though haha? I don't think this one's ever ...

sucked on the pillow like a teat? Does he think its a marshmallow? Please. Why the please? It seems an appropriate simile to me. I don't understand the Drake reference. ...

Thank you! Duffy is one of my favourite poets so being compared to her is an honour! Why don't you like the last line of the 1st stanza? Is it ...

Hey thanks for your comments! I thought a bit about the 2nd stanza and if I could introduce it more coherently. However, I think the woman's thoughts in the poem, ...

Thank you for your reviews. I showed this to my teacher the other day and although she loved the idea and the passion, she said the technique wasn't quite there. ...

Thank you for taking the time to review! This piece is actually a one-off and I used it as coursework for my English GCSE, the guidelines were only "a piece ...

Thanks for taking the time to review everyone, I appreciate it! I've edited the poem a little, tweaking a few things using your criticism and some of my own, so ...

Thanks for reviewing! :D I'd like to clear up the confusion as other people I've shown it to found it confusing as well! What I've tried to portray is that ...

I'd love to be able to admit that I called this Annie May because of your reason, but nope! It's about a friend called Annie May and this is where ...

I've added about 1000 words for anyone who wants to read xxxxxxxxxxx

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PG- I've referred to my relationship with my dad as a war where neither of us are backing down, and i'm asking is it up to me to back down, ...

when you was his husband, when you knew then and there, . this should be when you were his husband and also momma