Hello there!
This is an interesting poem. I really liked this. At first, I didn't get it much until I read it again and looked at those reviews above me.
It’s like the time when Mum
Put too much makeup on one eye,
Dark it was, and purple.
We weren’t allowed to ask why.
This is nice. I get the message of this line because of the makeup and purple thing.
Anyway, I won't nitpick on those mistakes 'cause I can't find anything. Maybe the rhyming and the structure of this poem?
Overall, this is definitely good and unique. Love the title too!
Keep writing!
Peace out!
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