heather321

Thanks so much for the review!(:

Thank you so so much!(:

Thank you so much for all the advice! (The constant repetition is because that's how my teacher assigned the peom to be written (with lines 2 and 4 becoming lines ...

This is sooo good! The imagery and figurative language are amazing and the flow/rhythm is great! the only thing is the last lines "leave ruby scar upon my heart" it ...

Thank you sooo much!

Thanks so much!

Oh my gosh thank you so much!! i wasn't really sure i kind of just needed to write.. i was basically hoping no one would be super mean but i ...

i really really like this! it's really fun yet also has deeper feelings most people can relate to.. the whole thing is really clever and i love the title a ...

That's super cute:)

I love this! It's sooo good!

This is really good but "your" should be "you're"

Good job, but there are some spelling mistakes: *wasn't, *important, *children's, *fiercely, *could have(not could of), and *can't. There are also a few comma issues... and there should be a ...

Really good poem! But i think in the second stanza you meant "*a* far away..not "*an* far away" ..but other than that it's really good!

This is really good.. exept the rhyme scheme kind of bothers me... the begining starts off ABAB then ends with AABB and it sort of throws off the flow i ...

I really liked this! The ryhming and flow is especially good and the topic is something I'm sure almost everyone can relate too... I also love the title:) yeah..great job!