Published March 8, 2012
You scream
You yell
Your quick to tongue
Your right
Your stubborn
Your quick to judge
You hear
Your ears
You never listen
You laugh
You joke
You think its funny
You taunt
You chase
You think your helping
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Heyo there.. So i'll give you a quick review.. I think it's pretty good... a bit too short, yes, but otherwise...try to add something if you can.. there's one error though... the 'your' should be 'you're'...that all..
Keep writing!!
Harshita:)
This is really good but "your" should be "you're"