heather321

This was such an interesting idea for a poem! It was really well written- the descriptions so complete i felt as though i was watching not reading so nice job ...

I loved this! So short yet there was so much to it! The only flaws i found were some spelling and punctuation ("achieve" at the beginning, "sacrifice" in the last ...

This is really good! The comparison is so creative and so thorough and overall really really well-written! 3 little things to fix: 1. "poison" is spelled wrong in the eighth ...

This is beyond amazing. I have also read Night and i honestly doubt anyone could ever write such a perfect depiction of all the horrors as well as you did ...

Oh my goodness. I love this so much. The so simple yet has so much depth and it's so cute and sweet and just perfect. Beyond perfect. If I'm not ...

I really like the way this poem flows! It's also extremely relate-able(my favorite kind of poems to read:)) I have to agree with Aley though that the first stanza could ...

Like everyone else who commented, the first word that came to my mind when i read it was "sweet". I love how you compared flowers to friendship, as opposed to ...

"what your thinking" should be "what you're thinking" This is a really easy to relate to which i like.. however it's not necessarily super poetic, though it does have a ...

Whoa this is super good! Amazing wording and just written super like..cool! i loved it, great job!(:

This is by far my favorite out of all of yours

I really love this! It's honest, simple, cute, i could easily relate to it, and it's just all around happy! I loved it, great job(:

This is written so well! The imagery and the word choice is amazing! I personally think you should make it longer though.. it's like right as i was really really ...

This is really good, the imagery and flow is amazing! The only thing i really found was "To let the golden sunset shines through my dream" should be "shine" not ...