-
Re: My Best Friend
Hi.. okay, the theme and selection for topic was nice.. But I too will say that it was very very forced.. The flow just was disrupted at so many places ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Just a Traitor
Hi.. Welcome to YWS!! Hope you'll love it!! alright.. I'll begin by saying that I liked your poem very much.. Except for a n error or two it was very ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Happy Birthday, Teenager
Hi.. I can't help but say its really great.. You've given it a very nice starting. though the flow was good, somehow I felt that maybe this poem would have ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Bruised and Bloodied, We Wipe the Tears Away
Hey.. So I'll begin by saying that your poem was nice.. The emotions have been expressed very nicely and deeply.. This whole concept was also very nice.. the imagery was ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Misrepresented Guardians
Hi.. Welcome to YWS!! I'll start by saying that it was very descriptive so it had me glued o screen. very nice but i will be honest and tell you ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Memory of Sorrow
WOW!!! It was so beautiful!! I loved it immediately!! I love the way you have expressed the feeling and hatred for the pain of all those people.. It expresses something ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: an old poem I found in my old diary
Hi.. I really don't know what to say.. Yeah it was really very short.. Though the three lines are good enough but in my opinion I think you ought to ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Rosy Painted Butterflies
Hi.. Like the first reviewer I'll also say that there is a lot of repetition.. Replace the words and you could make this good poem a very brilliant one.. The ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Save Her
Hi Priyansha.. I'll begin off saying that he idea and theme were what I liked.. I would agree to what other reviewers have said: it indeed was a bit boring.. ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Light
Welcome to YWS!! I will ensure you you'll Love it.. Now for the review.. I have no nitpicks.. It was so good!! I instantly loved it.. The rhyme scheme was ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Be Quick.
hey.. I'll point d only mistake i sensed.. The flow overall was good but sort of lost in the last stanza. Then also maybe you should change the ending a ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: French Teacher from Hell
Hi, It was very funny and enjoyable!! Really good read. Great flow and the rhyme was good too... But the best part was, I totally understood it!! it so irritating ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: Please People Stop Fighting
Hi Priyansha!! God i so LOVE this poem!! You've kind of stolen the words out of my diary!! It was literally engrossing and lovable.. Besides the motivation and inspiration was ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: Unknown Love
wow!! It was so beautiful!! I loved it!! like really loved it!!! it was so full of love and emotion that i just fell for it.. I totaly understood the ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: This is Me
hey... It was a very nice piece of work.. the words were truly felt and extremely true.. the concept was just brilliant. what you have expressed in a few words ...
Apr 24, 2011
