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Re: Time.
I must confess: I didn't really get what you meant to say... I'm sure that if if i get it, it would be great... just that.. Probably a bit more ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: I can't make you love me.
hey... firstly I would just like to say that maybe you should have put it in the romance story might have sit better there... otherwise.. Your story was really very ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Moody Days That End in Y (Poetry Pair Contest)
hey... first of all, Best of luck for the competition... I'm also taking part with Lava... Now for the poem.. Firstly-awesome!!! it was brilliant and so funny that i tears ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Family First
hi.. I will again say, Like the other reviewers have, It was a good piece but needs a lot of improvement... Probably telling who exactly she is would have been ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: deleted
hey there... I read it and loved it.. you've written on something that's true and real.. I've read one more poem like that on YWS... Both of your poems were ...
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Please Stay
hey... I really loved your poem... The only thing I felt was that the repetition you have done. I know it was to emphasis but I think you don't need ...
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Barriers
hey... I saw it and title seemed interesting so I decided to see... but made up my mind to review after I read it because its something very true... There ...
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Love
hey... I just read your poem i will say one thing... You made mistakes at a couple of places as the reviewer before me has pointed out... But I still ...
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Too Ugly
Hi... I read your poem and loved it instantly... I, a coward, Ran from you. Because you’re too beautiful for me. And I am too ugly inside from what I ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: Cannot Forget
wow!!! It was such a deep and nice poem... You've done the description so good that I could imagine myself in that place.. It was really nice and particularly the ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: When I Should Be Paying Attention
hey and welcome!!! If I decide to ignore the rhyme troubles...I guess its a really good poem..Something that everyone can simply relate to... Your poem is about something everyone does ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: My Stupid Teenage Essence
hey... Just want to tell you...that it was really nice and I think without all those 'smart words' it was really good... the flow was so smooth and relaxing and ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: If You Only Knew My Name
hey Matt, This poem was really brilliant!!!:) And the idea of a letter to yourself was what made it exceptionally good... And the emotion is so deep and clear that ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: A Light Where There is Darkness
hmmmm..... gimme some time to think... Okay, I would totally agree with Tommybear in saying that it is different and less compared to your other works... But yes if you ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: My Whispers On the Ocean
hey again... Firstly I would like to tell you that I have started loving your poetry.... Brilliant and deep felt... The only thing which I feel needed improvement was: And ...
Mar 10, 2011
