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Hi Harry here for a review: I loved this poem, it has feeling and opens your eyes to reality. People don't relies how big the world really is in till ...

Hi Harry here for a review: OK first off I would add way more than just a few sentences. It kind of looks like you don't want to write, but ...

Hi Harry here for a review: great job you have a good rhyme scheme here. You also make people feel like they are apart of the story. You show that ...

Hi Harry here for a review: Lets start part by part, starting with this one: My Lord, I speak about your glory. Let me tell your wondrous story, About how ...

Hi Harry here for a review: I liked this poem, but it is a little depressing. First of your punctuation was good and your spelling was perfect. And you also ...

Hi Harry here for a review: I loved how this poem makes you feel the words more than reading like this part:the breeze Feels cool on your face. *** The ...

Hi Harry here for a review: OK the title draws you away from the poem itself a little bit, I was expecting something different and you had this. Great job ...

Hi Harry here for a review: I love the show supernatural and this poem really sets the sign of the show, you really have a passion for what you write ...

This is a really depressing poem but I loved how you can feel the pain and anger that your character has, and I also like how you described the character ...

Hi Harry here for a review: I loved this poem, and you have a lot of feeling, mostly of anger and heartbreak. you have did good on rating it 18 ...

Hi Harry hear for a review: What a sad poem, made me cry because I lost my grandma in a hospital and when you did this part: Though after hours ...

Hi Harry hear for a review: This is a beautiful poem and if I where you i would add more to it. You show your expression and you love to ...

It is beautiful but sad, I could hear the slow sad melody from a guitar and this would make a perfect country song, it shows why some people would have ...

I loved this, it showed your anger and sadness against people using you, don't be afraid to express yourself, you are a great writer and you need to show that ...